What is your opinion?
False Vampire Love
"So..I loved the story so far! They were Spelling Mistakes but..It's not a big issue, All of Us Authors do make mistakes :') I can't wait for the next chapter! (P.S, I skipped the whole..Smut Scene xd, I don't read smuts because well..I'm an Innocent Child haha, I hope you won't mind, I didn't skipped anything, I just skipped that part😅) "
Fascinating
"Nice plotting ! I believe that you had have imagined all the story in your mind first .Not like others just want to prolonged it . Your writing skills are amazing. The thing that attracts my intentions towards your story is your scene description.Carry on just like this."
Good
"Good so far the plot is very nice and the cover of the book is nice to grammar is good to writing skills is good too but I like the story so far so...make more and keep writing :)"
False Vampire Love (But my love for this isn't false😉😘)
"I love this so far! Definitely a highly recommend for me! I cannot wait for the next chapters!❤❤"
RECOMMENDED
"I would so much recommend this, one of my favourite stories, looking forward to the next chapters!"
Cool!
"It's really great for the first try and the plot seems good enough. Just keep writing and then you'll get the flow. No one is perfect. Keep it up! "
It needs some work
"Overall, the book has an excellent plot. However, I found several plot holes throughout the book. You also changed from first person to third person point of view about half way through the book, which confused me. I also wish there was more development in Kenji and Leanna's relationship because their relationship and the story itself feels fast paced. Here are my suggestions: try to slow down and develop your characters more. What are their likes and dislikes? Is there something that haunts them? If so, then why? How did the characters get where they are now? Create characters that your audience can bind with. As for grammatical errors, I suggest using grammarly or some other grammar correction site."
False vampire love
"I think this book is amazing I would definitely read it over and over, and recommend it💜😁😃"
Good going! 🤩
"I find this story intriguing and I like the plot and narration. It needs to be presented properly though. If the paragraphs aren't break at a suitable portion, it feels like never ending chapter and starts getting boring. I would recommend to display your dialogues properly. If it gets combined with the narration than it gets difficult to differentiate it and disturbs the flow of reading the story. I would say it has started great with a bit of mystery, violence and of course supernatural touch. Some use of punctuation marks will do wonders too to make your point clear. I like the chapters so far and the story has a great potential💜. I hope I wasn't too rude giving my honest review and I hope you take it in a constructive manner. All the best and keep up the good work. Your hardwork will certainly be payed off👍🙏😃✨ "
