What is your opinion?
Amazing
"I am black myself and I love that you talked about racism because it is is something that needs to be stop"
A great start
"I love how you tackle racism and other problems in humanity. I also love how you keep your characters realistic and grounded in possibility. The only this I can see is that there are a few places where your flow is off or your grammar is not perfect, but this is easily fixed in the future. I think this has great potential."
We Shall Overcome
"So far, I’d like to say this story has great potential!For people of color, the main character is very easy to relate to under various circumstances according to her struggles. The backstory is in depth and you get a better understanding of how they all interact in their space. Your writing style can easily put your audience directly in the shoes of Theresa and how she sees the world around her. This is a story that needs to be recognized across the globe to aid in moving forward as a people and I really hope that with others reading this they can help push this message as well.  There were only a few grammatical errors, and I agree with people that have advised for you to incorporate explaining the backstory into story progression so that it flows a bit better and feels more natural and organic, but other than that I have no other things to say other than great job and that I highly recommend reading this book. 💕 "
Absolutely beautiful story!
"I have not read such a touching and motivating story like this one. You dare go above and beyond, and you bring your characters to life with the many incidents that happen. I like how you express everything in order. The chapters you keep fairly short, but interesting. Every chapter is filled with that OMG moment or WOW, that makes you keep reading. I was never bored while reading. If you can go back and edit this story, fix some grammar issues and others, you will have a perfect story. Space out your paragraphs to allow for a better read. Use Microsoft Word at home or online to help you with this. Spell Check your writing too. Some words are misspelled or used incorrectly. You can still understand the story, but it would read better. I really enjoyed the depth of your writing. You go straight on to an issue that some may be afraid to write about. You are brave for making a book that deals with racism and addresses various issues within your plot. I would love to see your book in bookstores and in schools. I can actually see a movie being made from this book. You get 5-stars from me! Great work on your story. Keep writing more stories. You have the talent!"
Wonderful
"It's really great and has a great content in it Love this"
Awesome
"An incredible masterpiece. Really liked the plot. This story explains the current situation very well. It is surely an eye opener."
Great Read
"As you can see I read every chapter in one sitting! I may not be able to get up from my chair. I liked it that much. It carried me along because I cared for the main characters and that is because of your writing. It does need some work but all novels do. It needs to be edited and all the technical and grammar mistakes need amendments. Think about starting with a drop straight into some action. Give us the back stories as part of the narrative and conversations between people. I think your story starts later when you are outside that Principal's door. You have a good set of characters both the good and the abusive characters. I would like to understand Miss Ross better. We know very little about what motives her. I would not change your point of view. Don't let Sebastian pick up the narrative. The story works third person and you can give more details about the feelings and attitudes as the omniscient narrator. You know what you want to say- keep writing. You have talent."
Wonderful
"I love how this book tackles the difficult topic of racism and and how it is to really face it. The main charterer is also very well written. Overall an amazing story."
Amazing
"I really loved your story, especially because it tackles the theme of racism . I loved all your characters. especially Miss Ross. I did find a few technical errors but that can be solved while editing. Overall, good job."
Educating
"This book can educates people about racism. This is exactly what we need right now."
We shall overcome
"Basically I think it is an okay story. It is my friend's story and we all support her in this. I think it is worth reading because it tackles a real social problem. It's actually showing the "victim's" life, how it's hard for them. Just binge in it as I did, no regrets!"
Wonderful!
"This was an amazing read! The plot takes you back and makes you think of how life use to be. Teresa’s relationship with her dad was perfect and showed how close they are. I like that the story wasn’t purely focused on romance and gave us a taste of how racism affected her daily life. SUCH a good read. "
Promising
"This story has every potential to be amazing. The idea is there. The plot is there. The characters are strong on their own. Loved it!"
good
"I am new here and I saw your post. I did not read the whole book . I just wanted to say that your book is good and catchy but that seems a little childish though. These kind of stories are told too many times. Your main idea is good though. Racism should be put forward but your story is like every typical teenagers book. We can already anticipate what will happen. I can already tell that the two main characters will fall in love. You could have tackle it in a different way like more uncommon things. There are grammar mistakes. But let me tell you that for a first book, this is great. I appreciate your concern on racism and I give you credit for writing about, something that not many writers have the courage to do. You have great ideas. Try to use this incredible talent to create something that the word never saw before. Do no follow this typical teenage style, by what I read I can see you have some potential. Continue."
