Inkitt
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Another banger!

"I absolutely loved every bit of this story. Can’t wait for the next one in the series"

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Becoming her protector

"Great read!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Becoming her protector

"Good plot. But maybe can be a little bit more as i find the ending quite hanging. Overall its a good story"

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:)

"Honestly loved this story and you've hooked me into the characters! Can't wait to see what you write next!!!"

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Its really good..

"Looking forward to the next chapter "

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Searching for acceptance

"I enjoyed the storyline. This is book 2 which continues about a character from the original story written. A big burly man who grew up in the mafia. He tries to do good things and tends to do things the legal way. He meets a woman who he finds to be beautiful however others notice the scars on her face and do not look to see the total beauty of this woman. It is love story with drama and suspense. It ended with a cliffhanger. I hope a new story continues."

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Good book

"Good book couldn't put it down."

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"As usual, very beautiful. But why the cliffhanger "

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Definitely readable

"I was captivated by the prologue. As I was reading, It got to a point I couldn't put my phone down. This is a kind of magnificent book that get you hooked till the end. It's definitely a good read. Keep it up."

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Sweet

"Okay, so I found the story quite sweet. I instantly fell in love with the big bad but adorable pouty Alexios and lovely, smart Ysabel. There were some incidents and conversations which were incredibly funny as well and those just made my day. However, I was left somewhat disappointed with the random turn of events such as their marriage and how things progressed afterward. And the end, I felt was a little dissatisfying. Or is it the end or are their more chapters to follow? Forgive me if there are more chapters remaining but if there are more ti come, I can't wait to read them. I felt there were some little errors in grammar but other than that, it's a really good story that has the perfect mixture of sweetness, darkness, mystery, romance and everything you would want in a romance story. I really enjoyed reading it and will be waiting if there are, indeed, other chapters coming along!"

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Searching for acceptance

"I'm looking forward to the whole book! Thank You "

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Searching For Acceptance

"Wow! I wish it would have ended differently. But I liked the story "

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Searching for acceptance

"I enjoyed the story a lot. Hoping for an update! The plot was interesting, with just enough mystery to keep me entertained, and the female character was unusual for this kind of stories. Kudos on that! The only thing that I didn't like, or understand, is that she had a panic attack walking outside, but on the next page she was meeting family and going to Vegas. It felt like a plot hole. Other than that, it was great. Keep up the good work!"

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My Thoughts

"Until I read the whole story and I will give full points or not. So far though it is flowing nicely. I am enjoying the read. It isn't dull and holds you so far."

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