What is your opinion?
I'd like to say so far im intrigued
"Can't wait for another update, surely adding it to my binge list"
Family is everything!
"I was being manipulated through the entire story. Cielo is a double edged sword. I have a feeling the woman, is not to be underestimated. She's got brains behind her innocent face. I was scared of Cielo but perhaps I should keep an eye on Leia. Gripping!"
Really good.
"It's a really intriguing book and I love the female character so much. The book has a lot of potential keep it up. "
Detailed and Edgy!
"I have read and reviewed a lot of romance novels recently, and this one absolutely was the 'edgiest' and most beautifully detailed! I love that you included 'spoken' Italian in your dialogue; it made for a wonderful addition and made your characters more authentic! Keep writing, and I will keep reading--you are producing great work!"
Betrayal
"Great start for the story. The plot is interesting and I also liked the way you have described different events. Great jobππ"
Good job for a book not in your 1st language
"This story has a fantastic start. The characters are really relatible. The events of the story was pretty good. Nice job... keep writing."
Interesting Mob story
"I find this story to be quite intriguing. Very great start to the novel. If youβre into mob type stories this is for you. It is filled with suspense, and some interesting action."
BETRAYAL β€οΈ
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Betrayal
"Your plot is extremely amazing as alwaysπ. I found it really interesting and I adore your creativity. Just want you to add more emotions and expression as you did in previous chapter. This chapter deserves so much love π. Hope you publish next chapter soon!!"
Betrayal
"I like the idea of a different outcome for this kind of story. The female lead seems to be a lot more rational and smart than many other women I've read in this genre. We shouldn't let the sexy, bad guy win! It's a great start, but it definitely needs a great deal of editing. Still, you are going in the right direction! Keep up the good work!"
