What is your opinion?
Really funny
"I love the narrator! The narrator seems like really cool and funny person. I like the jokes like Adam and Steve, I like how you roast Oli and how you described this shirtless attractive guy. You do have a lot of potential. I love your story and I can't wait until you write the next chapter."
Adore it
"I love how this story is going so far. The plot is 100% amazing and I can't wait to read more. I love how the story expresses lgbtq+. I know your only on your first chapter but I can see that this will be a great story. In the future it will be great to discribe the other characters more and dive deeper into there stories. Again I know your only on the first chapter so you have plenty of time to describe them more. "
Very nice!
"I really like what you have going here! It's nicely descriptive and it makes me curious as to what's going to happen next. There are some grammar that needs to be fixed and reviewed, but otherwise a very nice story."
Has potential
"I really loved the fact that you have used the themes of lgbtq+ rights in your story. I think it brings a positive message to all readers so I'm impressed. I also like the way you have emphasized the fact that there are school's that are discriminatory to individual's in this community. I would have preferred if you specified the time in which the character's are living in, however, I understand that this is your first chapter and there is room to do that later. However, I did notice some grammar and style issues which you can correct after editing your book. Overall, I think you have potential. Good job."
