What is your opinion?
awesome
"An excellent masterpiece."
Amazing
"It's a really nice book I love it it's awesome recommend to everyone"
Amazing
"I love the direction the story is taking. This will surely be an incredible story as the start itself is good. I don't know a lot about Pakistan so I am very happy to know a little more about how life is there. This is a great start. Continue and never stop."
Great
"I really loved how you have told a tale in Pakistan I have never read books based in Pakistan before and this book was a real eye opener about the culture and life there. However, I did see some errors in punctuation and paragraphing which can be fixed when editing."
The Tale Of Endearment
"The story is great so far, other than some grammar issues this story is astonishing."
has potential
"overall the story has a nice plot, but the book can be confusing, during the story you made zero use of quotation marks when the characters where talking, it was very hard to read it because of that, it would be more convenient to use quotation marks when people are talking as it gives the book a nicer, neater and more enticing look. i also felt that you were rushing a bit in the story as you left out details that would make readers feel like they were actually saher. when people read books they want to feel like they can visualize everything. when you said she took in the beautiful scene in chapter one you should have emphasized on how the scenery was beautiful, you could've mentioned the flowers or the gardens or even statues and podiums , you could've given the place a landscape."
