What is your opinion?
American werewolves..... 🤔🤤
"Lovely story but sometimes a character name is one then as talk continues called something else, also small changes happen that make you stop and reread paragraphs...proof reading needs to be better ..it stops flow of enjoyment from story"
Ppels
"I would recommend this book to anyone! I think the author has done a very good job. I can’t think of anything negative to say about this book. It is all positive."
My take on the story
"Truly enjoyed this read…. Wished she had stayed with Matthew. But of course her destiny!!!!!"
North American werewolves
"It has got a nice plot and I love that the author has brought in the old with the new . I hope there will be a second book . "
North American Werewolves
"I would to love to finish reading this story, you are a good writer"
North American werewolfs
"Very good story , glad it’s just fiction can believe some of the choices made by Olivia but it is a good story hope to continue to read on "
Olivia the Wolf Savior
"I'm glad that I took a chance in reading this book, the concept was interesting, however, there were parts that were not necessary...too much detail re the overview of the different mates, the coronation, Italy trip, game night, etc. I would have love to know the difference abilities of the Alphas. Also, what's the purpose of Olivia mated to Alec if they are not having a sexual relationship. Overall, I really enjoy the story, but it's too long..too many unnecessary fillers. Also, there were no real cliffhanger to entice readers."
North American Werewolves
"I love this novel so far. Really getting interesting. "
North America Werewolves
"Nice story, love it so far!"
Awe love this
"Love this story cant wait for updates "
North American werewolves
"Omg! I love it! I cant wait to read more. I couldnt put it down, I read all the chapters in one night "
Wolves
"Wolves, kings, and queens always hit me hard, I love this type of books. I have to say this is good! Would totally recommend it, I've been on it for two days and so far like it, haven't finished it but hey good things take them slow so you can enjoy it! This book also has potential so the author promotes this, well done, and can't wait for another book!"
Great read editor needed
"This book has the beggings of an amazing novel. An editor would be needed but the author gets the main character to a T. I am loving it so far with the suspense and leadership a strong women brings to all her people. I would recommend this book to anyone into supernatural or even not. The he said she said going back and forth needs work in on. The dialogue or the charachtets. "
Prologue
"I must confess I'm a sucker for werewolf stories. This book has a promising and captivating plot, and I can't wait to read the rest of its' development. Based on the prologue, I do have some tips and suggestions. There are some parts where you tell instead of show, for example: "He is on his knees, and I can see his pain" , instead of writing that she sees his pain you could use physical descriptions to emphasize that pain. Maybe his brows furrow or his eyes plead, or he places a fist to his heart. Dialogue tags can be replaced with action and/or descriptions of the ambient, feelings or expressions. Keep up the good work!"
North AMerican Werewolves
"The story was okay, although it had a plot hole that put me off almost from the start. The romance between the protagonists was too abrupt. In fact, I wouldn't even call it romance, considering that they just announced to her that she's the king's mate while she had just learned about werewolves, and she just accepted that and they got together. Also, she was the chosen mate of one of his friends who just handed her over like a piece of meet. These two facts made it unable for me to read further, I'm afraid."
