What is your opinion?
Gatekeepers 3
"Excellent story line. Very exciting and the details were amazing for visual. "
Epic Conclusion
"This story is such a great conclusion to the series."
Definitely 5 stars!
"I've read only half of the story so far. Not because I didn't like it (trust me, it's far from that) but because this is the third book and the few chapters I've read made me want to binge read the while series. Which I'm gonna do as soon as humanly possible. You have such an impeccable way of writing that got me fooled to your book even when I didn't really know what was going on for the first few chapters as I haven't read the other books. I found myself wanting to read more and more and more of your words! The characters and events all seemed SO REAL! This book's gonna be in my reading lost for a long, long time! I really love what I've read so far and I'm sure I'll love it even more once I've read the first two books! Great job!❣"
Incredible!
"I have read all three books quite quickly, simply because I could not put them down! I'd go as far to say that this book, and the two before it are the best that I've read in a long time. The writing style was unique, the characters were awesome and well built upon throughout each chapter. The attention to detail was once again spectacular, and it only made me fall in love with the plot that much more. I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story, and any other piece of writing that you create. You have a fan in me! "
Gatekeepers book 3
"Fantastic books have really enjoyed reading them. Does this story continue? "
What an interesting plot!
"Roxas7500: In the first paragraph, I notice you use the work black repeatedly in each sentence. What I do is Google synonyms or think of variants for a word I catch myself using too much. You could say "charcoal," "opaque," "dark-as-night," "obsidian," etc. Also note that when you use more than one adjective, separate with commas if it's harder to imagine reading aloud. Ex: "A black[,] scaled hand..." I like the way you describe the mysterious young lady in the beginning. You could think of a more creative way to say simple things to keep it interesting, such as "The voice that rang/echoed prior made a snorting sound that soon dissipated in the void." Rather than "The first voice made a snorting sound." The concept of these entities having worlds of their own, with a mission that a habitant must accomplish so the entity can evolve, is really intriguing! Again, noticing the word "lady" used a lot, you could switch it up with "maiden," "damsel," or "goddess". Some other recommendations, ex: "...one black eye with a [slit] pupil glared at her from the right side of his [visage]." "'You think I'm way behind the others?' [the] voice growled, less [emotionless] than it had been..." "...she put a less-than-convincing[,] calm smile [across her lips].""
