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My honest review
"Title and summary: Without even reading it first, these two aspects grab my attention. The title suggests we will be travelling through time but doesn't tell us where or when in time, although the subtitle does hint towards a certain bow wielding man who may wear green tights (not legolas). The summary however, delves into those details, it exposes the ideas and trips we will be taking as we progress, but it doesn't give too much away that I'm left wondering what else the story could include. Prologue: I am definitely loving the whole terra cotta army and the Chinese dragon emperor. It is something I found fascinating after watching the mummy, return of the dragon emperor. It is right up my street. There is a lot of information in this prologue and sometimes I did feel my brain trying to keep up, but I think if some sentences were adjusted and simplified then it would be much easier to absorb. Still, I like the characters you've introduced so far and can't wait to see how you work them into the other chapters. Main characters: Tristan and Troy, only teenagers and yet left with such weight in their shoulders. Tristan is definitely a good source of humour, even in dark situations and Troy is more of the one to ground her and see the logic rather than throwing himself into something heads first, and they work well with each other, the balance each other out The one criticism I do have about their relationship, is the honesty about their feelings towards one another so early on, as previously stated in my comments. But other than that I like how they're developing already Relationships with other characters: As of now, they don't have greatly established strong relationships with others, they have acquaintances like their teacher who sent them on this journey, but they dotn have much to do with each other besides mentions and the interaction before their mission began. Another example is Robin Hood, who they meet and have somewhat of a love- hate relationship, with his quirky wayd of grabbing their attention and not so well said directions. They also meet the Vivien who says little but guides them on their journey further, their interaction much like other legendary being of English lore, is brief and serves the purpose of progressing the plot. But I love them all nonetheless. Plot: On a whole, as it stands so far, I like the plot, it is progressing gradually and we have information as to why they are there and what needs to be done so we have the mission in mind as we read. I can see it being well thought out seeing as there clearly has been a lot of research done and has been purposefully and carely planned. I cannot wait to see how the rest plays out and to see how the plot develops with the characters and where it will lead down its twists and turns. Grammar and punctuation: I did notice a few sentence structures were slightly off but it didn't deter me from reading but I did have to go over it a couple of times just to be sure I understood. In terms of punctuation, I couldn't see much wrong, the paragraphs and sentences were of good length and you could clearly tell who was talking and when. Things to note/work on: Just watch the sentence structures, it isn't anything major. The development of Troy and Tristans relationship. And one thing I'd like to ask, is how does Tristans past with her mother being killed play a part in the book? I understand it unsettles her in the specific environment they go to in the shop, but is there not another incident that isn't so extreme that could have taken place leaving her anxiety ridden and traumatised? Just something I remembered while coming to the end of the review is all. "
Amazing Book
"Loved this story, well the 10 chapters there are of it so far. I think being English some of the timelines are all meshed together though. I realise the author is South African so English legend is not going to be top of any list but the heroes that aid the pair all come from different periods of English history. King Arthur, for example, didn't exist before a poem written in the 15th century, Robin Hood was about 1370 for his earliest appearance, Godiva was Saxon era 1066-1086, Peeping Tom didn't appear until the 18th century and from what I read he was struck blind because he tried to spy on Godiva and God punished him for it! He fared better than if her husband had found out because Leofric had vowed anyone who observed her would be put to death! But I'm nitpicking and I can excuse it as Xu Fu messing with the timelines. The story is excellent and I look forward with eagerness to how it finishes. Is it going to be the start of a series with Troy and Tristan unpicking the timelines of History (see Dr Sam Beckett in the TV series Quantum Leap, "putting right what once went wrong") Excellent Book Kim keep it up!"
I JUST TIME TRAVELED!
"The author has such knowledge about history, that not only do we dive into the story because of a smooth yet energizing flow, we’re feeling the accuracy of it. I feel I’m learning something. There are many in between lines the author addresses without never mentioning them. Very smart! I also admire the research and efforts put into this riveting story. I recommend for all the adventurers, out there! No! In fact I recommend to absolutely every body/ this book touches a full spectrum. I wish all of you get lost into it! Because it’s a quality bowl of fresh air! "
The time travels of Tristan and Troy Book One.
"As I read, I thought of the classic John Myers Myers Silvelock fantasy. There is a certain C.S. Lewis feel as well. The story is engaging and enjoyable. I would recommend it to my Daughters. My only complaint is that it is incomplete. When will there be more?"
Quite Engaging!
"Kim's books never cease to surprise me every time! The descriptions are as vivid as ever. Whip that up with some amazing and scaringly accurate human personalities, and voila! Another masterpiece! I truly adored the witty banters and exchanges between Tristan and Troy. It would be a joy to meet them in real life. There were honestly minimal corrections here and there and spacing problems during the first few chapters; however, that's normal for first drafts. Trust me, the book gets better with each chapter. As for the plot, rest assured it can keep you on your toes! There are new pieces of information given at the ends of the chapters, and you can't help but want to read on more to find out what happens next. Personally, I like a story that's not predictable, and this truly captivated me all the more with that fact! You won't want to miss this story! You're doing a phenomenal job, Kim! Keep writing! xo"
The Magic Tree House for young adults
"This was a fun read so far. It reminded me so much of the magic tree house and magic school bus books growing up when I was a kid. As a person who loves history, the concept of going back into the past and preventing things from altering time is like a fantasy dream come true. I love every minute reading this piece, and I hope you get to continue it. And if you need suggestions of what eras you would like to write about for future stores with troy and Tristian, just let me know. Again, I love this piece."
Interesting
"I am into history and fantasy and it's a good read. and it was nicely written"
Teen fiction.
"I would definitely classify this book under teen fiction. Sounds almost like a short story for a school project. Overall it is an easy read and light story that could be read in less than a day."
