What is your opinion?
(Chapter 1 - 3) An Interesting Opening
"When I saw the cover, I thought I would read a mystery book, but I am glad I was wrong. The first chapter is powerful enough to introduce us about the main character and this being who showed up, telling both her and the readers what was happening. I like the interaction between them. The second chapter felt too long for me, but the way you introduced Axel is great. His out of date house made me wonder if it really was a time slip or he was just a weirdo. On the contrary, the third chapter felt a little too short because the conversation in the "dream" was so short. But the appearance of The Being humored me. About grammar and punctuation, I didn't find anything wrong with the format or tenses. Anyway, I think this story is really interesting. I wonder where you would take the story to. I wonder how the mechanism of this "saving someone's life" worked. I am waiting for The Being to take a form later. I am officially their fan. Keep it up! Regards, Kei Angelus"
Loved. Loved Loved!
"I generally never review a book that isn't more that 6 chapters in length, at least. But I am enamored with this story and the simplistic yet refined writing, vivid and immersive. And I need to know more, so I hope you update soon!!"
Absolutely LOVED IT!
"Your writing style is amazing - I especially love how descriptive you are. The scenes you portray are excellent as well. I loon forward to reading further installments!"
Good beginning.
"This is really good, the starting makes it sound mysterious, making the reader yearn for more.Great work."
