Savannah’s Smile
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"I have just read a few chapters and I am sure it sounds like every other teenage romance out there in the first few chapters but it isn't. So go for it. i am sure you won't regret it."

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Tiara

33 chapters read

SAVANNAH SMILE

"I like the relationship between Noah and savannah. I would reccomend this book to other people I know that like to read."

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"It's great, but you need to put quotation marks when someone is speaking. Other than that, I think it's good."

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hinakhan56

2 chapters read

Interesting plotline

"Okay, so the plotline is very unique and amazing. But the writing style is a bit confusing. You need to put commas when you're writing a dialogue otherwise it's getting very confusing. Secondly, if you are writing dialogue and telling the feeling or the way of the speaker it should be a separate paragraph. There are some grammatical errors here and there. You can add a lot more and as a writer, you need the reader to be interested in the book by leaving the chapter on a cliffhanger so that the reader could make assumptions that what would happen next."

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Savanah Smile

"I did not feel that the story had enough depth. It was as if the story was told by a false friend and it was masking something unpleasant. Maybe it was the style of writing. The chapter was so long and there was an element of wit and cadence that I liked but overall it is not for me. It is like a muck up and done with some deft hand but the thing is it could have made me feel more than it did. I thought the characters were a bit wooded and there appeared to be something I had missed. The ambition of the writer must be respected."

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