What is your opinion?
Friendzone
"The story is off to a great start tho. In as much as it is quite confusing I hope it gets better. Great story tho "
Friendzone
"I wish the chapters were longer. The story is amazing. The only recommendation I have is not spilling out all of the information. I think it would make the story more interesting if the information was more spread out through the chapter. It was really good though. I liked all the characters. I can't wait for an update!"
Real
"The character's feelings are real. I also really like their sarcasm! There does tend to be a bit of a information dump sometimes, and I would like the chapters to be longer, but over all, pretty good!:)"
not enough dialogue
"great book, loved it, but might I give some advice? Put some dialogue into the story. 7 out of the 9 chapters were just describing his life of high school and whatnot. I liked the book, don't get me wrong, but try to put some talking of interaction within the describing detail."
Friendzone
"The storyline is no doubt amazing and interesting. The characters are seems alive and quite realistic. Although there needs some work to be done in P.O.Vs. I mean it seem more like a rough script rather than a detailed novel. A little more effort and your writing can be more interesting. It has a lot of potential though. Personally, I like Alison's character better than Charlie's. She is stubborn and a fighter. SO is Charlie but I just prefer Alison better. The essence of vividness is more in Alison than Charlie. Up till now, the story is smooth and interesting to read. I can't get it off my mind and I'm definitely hooked. Update soon . I will love to read more and get to know more."
Sweet!
"It's a slow, sweet and beautiful story with well-rounded characters. The setting is fascinating and also the plot which involves the journey of Alison Brooks to America, a different country. Love it, already! Well done, author! "
Friendzone
"It's a nice read when you sit near the fire place with hot cup of chocolate milk/ coffee on a chilly day. No care in the world it's just you and the characters in the book. The pace of the book is slow and the writer has made sure to point out minor details perfectly! Would love to read further as well ;) "
