What is your opinion?
Addiction loss
"Very interesting play on addiction. There is so much loss with addiction. Sad that Lisa had to endure that. Liked the read. "
Cute, Short, and Sweet
"I really enjoyed reading this. Love the descriptions of each sentence, each character. Great job!! There are some minor grammar errors but other than that, it’s a great story. Cute, short, and sweet. I liked how the characters were interacting with each other. Keep it up!! :)"
Lovely
"I like its a short story, as well as a lovely one. Sweet in a nice way, I like the way you wrote it, just a small suggestion flashback on the first part, name it flashback or something, I know it's clear that's a flashback but just in case. XD Keep up the excellent work, and write more, I totally suggest that!"
Lovely!
"I noticed a big improvement in the way you write. I am happy for you. This is an interesting love story from the perspective of a delusional drug-dependent protagonist engulfed in enchanting love. I enjoyed reading it. I also noticed a bit of inconsistency in your use of tenses., much fewer than the first time i read this story. You write much better now. Keep writing and keep improving. All the best!"
The ending is horrid
"Why did he have to die altogether without her just because of his addiction hate the ending of the story "
