What is your opinion?
Annoying Love Lust
"This book was quite interesting to read. I loved all of your plot and the story fell well together there were some mistakes I saw though. You have a ton of grammar errors and sometimes those errors made it hard to understand what the characters were talking about sometimes also your paragraphs are all mushed up together and I really got lost in where I was reading at. If you only take your time when reading and before you submit review your chapters it will get better and better in the end time will tell. Overall that it was a good fantasy/romance book I loved your idea of vampires,werewolf's etc. Good job on that! Good luck! -Leslie H."
Annoying love lust
"The book is hella good but it needs more chapters"
Kudos
"The plot is great 👍🏻...One thing I check in every book is the content of the story and the writing style... You can develop your writing style more, you will get better in it eventually..Everything seems to be great...You can describe some scenes in a more interesting way so the readers can understand each line and follow up...and there are grammatical errors but it’s great for a 14-year old girl🙃..Keep up the great work!🦋💙"
Intriguing and captivating
"I like the storyline. It is intriguing and is going to have plenty of twists that I can’t wait to read."
Marvellous !!!
"Beautiful! I am in love with your work your book was really worth reading But please babe do work on grammar (still i am giving you 5stars) Fascinating book!! "
Nice as it’s first time for you there are bit mistakes
"Nice book suspense great "
Hey, girl! I really love this story. I'm started reading it yesterday an it's rely nice. Keep writing!
"There is nothing wrong with your story. The plot, grammar and everything is perfect. Continue writing this story. "
Good work
"Hey girl! The idea is great and I feel the characters are developed nicely. Few grammatical issues that can be resolved later. Introduction chapter's title needs to be changed according to me. It can either be "Let's get introduced' or 'Introduction'."
I love the plot of annoying love lust.
"I like the plot like I said before, the punctuation's are spot on and the book really draws my attention to reading it."
Good start
"I loved the start. The characters are amazing although you can add a bit more descriptions. You are very talented. Keep up!"
Lust
"The chapters I have read so far were good, you have developed your characters great. There were a few grammar issues but nothing that isn't easily fixed up. ( I always say don't edit as you write, do it at the end!) Good Start :)"
Great read!
"Overall, I love this book! The story is fresh and who doesn't love vampires? Well, the only loophole is the lack of description. The author is a talented writer and just needs to give this book a bit of description to make it more amazing and successful! Love❤"
Amazing Read ✨
"To be honest the book was cool. I specially loved the MC's name, Maril (long since i heard some vintage names for MC) but there are somethings i would like to point out. I mean no harm or offense but speak as a random well wisher so there are a few grammatical loopholes that can be fixed. I would love to hear a more expanse, vividly painted scenario from you. You write amazingly but those grammar loopholes seem to dull down the sparkle shine of ur book. Overall I enjoyed the story and was thoroughly kept intrigued and marveled through the journey. Love, sruthi 💖"
Amazing read!
"I really loved the story so far. The dialogue was intriguing and clear. I can relate to so many of the characters in that they suffer from the same things I went through in the past. It makes them even more believable as characters, so well done on that!"
annoying love lust
"I like your book and your summary is very clearly return for he readers to understand keep up the good work and keep writing books like this i really liked it so all the best for u and ur book to hit the top i will keep encouraging and support u < 3333333:))))"
Beautiful and Amazing
"Your book is really good. Everything about it was amazing, from the characters to the plot. Everything flowed really well together. Other than a few grammer errors, I really like this book."
Beautiful and lot attractive
"Your work is fabulous no doubt just apnai Gujarati chiye etlaii you know grammatical mistakes....😁 The book is beyond fabulous and even I wish you to update it please...❤ Apart from some grammatical errors you expressed the best story line to your readers.. Good appreciable work... 😍"
Annoying Love Lust
"Firstly, I think you could provide a more detailed description of the story to draw people in and make them want to read your story, you may want to provide some simple details about your characters in it, (like their names, that they share a dance class and their relationship at the beginning of the story and maybe allude to why Jekual is different from the others). I spotted many grammatical errors, (missing punctuation, words, sentences that didn't make sense, lack of commas, use of the wrong their, there, or they're). I feel like the pacing could be slowed down, she goes from hating Jekaul to going to his party, to kissing him. Descriptions of the environment would give a clearer picture of your world and what the characters are experiencing. I feel like some of these characters' morals are contradictory to each other, they find the people who are bullying them attractive and she agreed to go to the party without much convincing. Also, why doesn't she trust her friends with what happened to her? All stories have potential, you just have to work out all the kinks, keep up the good writing."
Annoying Love Lust
"So here are some points I would like to point out. => Take your story slow. As much I have read you have so many clans to introduce, so many secrets to reveal and love story in the making. It gives you a perfect opportunity to make your story a good read by making it a bit longer and still not making it feel like a pile of unwanted stuff written. Use it to your advantage. => As you have so many characters to play a part in your story, describe them and their surroundings. It will allow readers to understand the characters and to go inside their heads. => Some minor grammar mistakes but it makes a great difference while reading a story. If one has to spend too much time sorting out these mistakes in their head they would eventually just give up to read any further. So suggested to edit it as you move ahead to keep the readers fastened by your story. At last, this book is definitely recommended to read. So many new paranormal lineages that are involved definitely keeps the story interesting. And the way it is narrated is also commendable. The storyline and plot are well imagined and goes with the story. Excellent work on that. "
It was good
"You have to describe a little bit more to connect with your audiences. I know you will improve!"
