What is your opinion?
Definitely a good read!!!!
"I love your story, how you engage your characters is outstanding. The plot and writing style is on point. My only problem is with the dialogue, what makes each individual author unique is the act to blend dialogues to make the conversation flow. Your book has the potential to reach great limits. Keep it up!!!!"
Amazing story
"Oh my goodness! This is such a good read and highly recommended. The writer engages you in the very beginning and keeps you throughout. The level of description is inspiring and writing style is clear. The only feedback I have is related to final editing. I highly recommend either finding someone to edit (I like fiverr.com) or read the story out loud and find areas to improve. Some examples for clarity. The first paragraph before chapter 1 says: Kachinga heard him turn in the shower as reached the front door. Maybe a better way might be: Kachinga heard him turn in the shower as HE reached the front door. Another example for clarity: His out of his league beautiful fiancé introduces him to her long time friend / father figure, Derek. A different way to say this might be: His “out of his league” beautiful fiancé introduces his to her long time friend & father-figure, Derek. Again just some suggestions. "
Very beautiful story
"Started reading the book in the morning and I'm now done. Overall, it's the best book I've read in a long time and also the first on this app. I couldn't stop reading it. I took very short breaks. It was confusing, mysterious, beautiful, but that's what made it interesting. In the end, it was a really beautiful story. I highly recommend it."
Enimity
"The plot was nice, though the dialogues had a lot of blanks like there were some parts missing, it was a good read."
Enmity
"The story is interesting, i love the creativity .i dislike the ending part though , i expected more."
