Good idea

"Review nThe description could do with a little bit more detail, but I do like shorter descriptions that don't give too much away. You need to start the first word of the first sentence in the description with a capital letter as well as the chapters titles. Some are written in lower case, one or two are in upper case, choose one so that it is all neat. Your opening would benefit with more detail as, describe the scene more, tell us a bit more about Caleb, Bryan and Bart. Also, your paragraphs are too short but adding more detail will fix that and having longer chapters will give the story more meat to it. You need to make sure you start a new paragraph when a new person is speaking too. There are times when you go between 1st person and 3rd person. I think personally that 1st person would suit this story better but it's up to you, just make sure it is one or the other. The mistakes in this story make it difficult to read and not as enjoyable as it could be so I would work on those because there is an interesting story here. Also, you have elements called sky, wind and air, they are very much the same thing so maybe replace one with fire and earth? And the sea is not an element of water is. This is a really good idea though but it just needs to be fine-tuned and it'll do excellent."