What is your opinion?
Every Waking Dream
"The story was very good. A little hard to believe that these kids figured all this out pretty much on their own, yet the cops couldn't. Glad the children were found, and a somewhat happy ending. Dreams hold a lot of meaning "
Sure recommendation...!! 😃😃
"Fantastic plot and an amazing read...!! 😁😁"
Loving it so far!
"This book snatched me right in! From the first paragraph I was hooked and couldn't wait to get to the next. This is definitely a good read"
Every waking dream
"Really like it so far! Keep writing. "
Every waking dream
"This story is very different from the stories i have read before....The other stories mainly talk about sex ..But this one is amazing.The main interesting part is that story starts from mental asylum...The main protagonist has an amazing friendship with Raven...The ending was sad but I felt relived when all the girls where rescued.."
Great writing
"This was a good read; the flow of the story and the interesting characters worked well. The writer knows how to create suspense and uses it well. The dialogue was natural and fit well with the age of the characters. Great piece of work!"
Every waking Dream
"Another excellent read, very intense, and very interesting. Good plot too and believable characters. Looking forward to more reads from this author!"
Breathtaking
"This is a fantastic thriller! The concept of a character entering other people’s dreams is so unique and enthralling. When I came across the blurb I knew this was my type of story. I am fascinated by dreams and suffer from sleep paralysis, so I felt invested from the onset. The characters are so developed and the plot unfolds meticulously. I felt connected to the story with the use of such exquisite writing, and by the end I was truly moved. The book could easily translate to publishing. I urge this author to do so if they haven’t already! "
I need to finish this !!
"This book has me chained to it !! Loving the story line "
I love it so far. When are you going to make more chapters to the book? I can't wait to read them!!
"I liked it all, it's so good, I want to read more chapters on it right away. "
Innovative and engaging!
"So far, you’ve got twenty-one chapters out, and I binged every chapter from start to finish. It rendered me speechless. There is no word to appraise your work, it’s that stunning! This is one of those books where you keep telling yourself just one more chapter and I will go to bed, and before you know it, it’s midnight already. Rarely do we get to read such a well-flourished book here on Inkitt. The pacing of the book was perfect, neither too slow nor too fast, which did an excellent job in keeping readers at the edge of their seat the entire time. Each one of your characters, whether it’s Aislin, Raven, Jess or Dr Clayborn, were fleshed out so realistically that I stopped considering them as fictional characters after a few chapters. It showed how much you’ve worked on their personalities and outlined them they came off so authentic. Another impressive aspect of this book is its brilliant yet concise descriptions. You have an amazing way with words; you choose them so perfectly that they grasp the exact movement/setting of the scene. As a flash fiction writer, I’ve been devouring new words like a hungry beast for years, so I can get my writing as precise as yours. You did it with so much ease — hat's off to you for that! The effort given to bring this book into existence is undeniable. The dialogues picked up the character’s personality quite realistically and gave each of them a distinct voice. I could not fault its accuracy (although admittedly I wasn’t really checking, as the storyline was so immersive). Overall, the story is awesome, and your descriptive style complemented the thriller perfectly. You got me hooked, and I can’t wait to read more chapters from the book! Please update soon!"
Absolutely , positively, Amazing 🤩
"Let me start off with the fact that the relationships and the plot are the BOMB. I started getting hooked around the middle of the story, and haven’t stopped since. I love this amateur detective stuff. It keeps me wondering if the suspect is really guilty or totally innocent. I smile at the little quips that Raven gives to Ais. Their relationship is very well-written. The characters are likeable. And I’m a sucker for some good ole mystery. Good job, I will continue reading."
I love it!
"I love 'Every Waking Dream'! It's not far along, but it's very well written and I'm a sucker for the storyline so far. I like to put at least one thing the author could do better in my reviews, but tbh, I don't have anything to say for this one! XD I'll definitely keep reading it as the chapters come out! Well done!"
how i feel for the story
"i realy liked the story and the mystery suspence i think the auther is great"
Mental illness and teenage drama meets paranormal abilities
"This story was an interesting deep dive into the experience of paranormal activity and its intersection with / overlap with mental illness. The crime thriller plot that ran through the story almost felt an afterthought in some places to the dramatic teenage angst and complicated emotional journey of the female lead coming to terms with her unique ability. This story wrestled with some big moral issues - involuntary mental health treatment, the impacts of family breakdown, alcoholism, eating disorders, human trafficking and personal comfort v the good of others. The story focused on the psychological ‘thrill’ with the majority of graphic violent incidents inferred as occurring off screen. The main characters were teenagers and there was PG sexual tension but no graphic sexual content. It feels like this story could be a prequel - setting up a back story for Aislin to become a detective as an adult. "
Every Waking Dream
"The book is amazing... The only thing I dont like is how scenarios drag through out a chapter to the next"
Every Waking Dream
"Although I love this novel, there are some few grammatical errors but all the same, it's interesting."
very walking dream
"good work I appreciate it"
