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Chaotic

"It's fascinating to see fourteen year old Alex's thought process, bit chaotic and symptomatic of ADHD, with his low attention span and hyperactivity. Love how his impulsiveness gets him into unexpected trouble. The affliction sounds daunting, reminds me a little of the greyscale disease from GOT. My favourite metaphor so far is of the dying oaks "These trees are a lot like people. They're rotting away, becoming hollow, losing their personalities." Scary that once the affliction takes hold, it seems as if they slowly lose their own humanity. And the world building so far is impressive! Good job!"

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Intense!

"I’ve only just started reading this book tonight and so far I’m hooked, despite only being 8 chapters in. The author has a great representation of teenage reactions to such a dystopian life they live. When I read this book I feel as though I’m there with the characters, experiencing everything they are. The writing technique is amazing and I’m excited to finish it. "

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Totes Cool!

"I've read the first few chapters, and it seems really imaginative and well thought through. The author has a really good way of writing about teenagers. The way they talk and think, the slang. I also. love how with the sickness in this book, it starts showing up slowly just on the nails which is really good. I also like with the Griffins, how they like to pick their riders by personality, I think that's a really good idea."

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