What is your opinion?
Scary Imgination
"Really scary i even got scared while reading beside me my younger sister made a really horrible sound later turned out she was itching my bed in boredom.😳"
Awesome!
"It's only chapter one and I was already on the edge of my seat! The author does an amazing job at painting a picture for you. You can really sense and feel what Robert is feeling, and it's great. Hats off to you!"
The Horror on Anglewood Road
"I definatly enjoyed this short story. The only constructive criticism I have is that the Author used multiple points of view. First they start out in 3rd Person Point of view, and then towards the end, they go into 1st Person Point Of View. There were also a few grammatical errors, which is ok. I'm not a Grammar Natzi. With that being said, I really enjoyed the story. Well done."
Off to a great start!
"This story does a really good job of building up suspense as any proper horror should. I really liked the description of the creatures and the sense of doom and gloom as the story progresses. I wished I could get a little more out of Robert, though. Maybe if we saw more about what his day was like before this, as opposed to just telling us what happened, and had him spend more time realizing the town is deserted (looking for friends, neighbors, family, etc.) might have added more to him so we'd feel more when he ends up a snack. Still, a very polished start. I would totally read more if you wrote it. Great job."
