What is your opinion?
Great
"Loved this, for someone with English as a second language you write wonderfully! A few tiny little errors but in no way did they retract from the wonderful story, great characters and enticing energy of this short story! Fantastic ❤️😍🔥❤️😍🔥❤️😍"
Love is beyond the gender
"Wow. Good storyline, and well narrated. And yes, love is beyond the gender as story revolves around that too. The characters are so great, all the four and their understanding is great. It shows the true value of love and trust. Their dialogues are nice and also their chemistry. Nice climax, (haha, unexpected). Well developed story line. From high school romance to such a great climax is just outstanding. Keep writing.. Keep your creative mind building such fantasies. 🙌🙌❤"
Sweet November
"Its really sensual seductive, i loved reading it"
Far Too Good!!
"I cannot explain how much I enjoyed this story with simple words. I was very much hooked and quite excited from beginning to end. I'd give anything to have a romance like this. Where can I find a Maxi?"
Fantasies explained
"Best story from the writter character being well developed and related well"
Lusty
"I give you five stars for the my reason that I love the way your short story flows. It's about friendship. How you trust friendship without discrimination. I am fun of erotic romance and I am amazed by this story though this is very common to us.. LGBTQ are not other's to me, I have a lot of friends from this community, and all I can say to some up everything keep it up, it's a good start... your writings are definitely good. plot are good hope you have a novel writings for sure i am your fans. keep it up and God blessed you aphrodite "
I love it!!
"I foresaw it before I had a glimpse. Now I've finally fallen into this book's trance. What would one expect from the Greek Goddess of love anyway?Good work Aphrodite! I'm definitely going to read this till it's complete...then I'll read it again🙊 Totally recommendable!"
That's a nice story . Have to complete with happy ending...we should seen this story postive of emotions between two souls.it is just pure
"So.many twists maxi👍👍"
Sweet November
"If the Greek Goddess Aphrodite had written a book, it would have been this one. I don't usually read erotic novels, so I don't really know what to expect. But you've really thrown the reader in at the deep end which can be a good thing. Keep up the good work, Sofia"
A great love lusty dramatic story with true blend of care friendship & romance
"A good mixed & blend up story"
Sweet November
"So awesome plot, it feels that happening in front, It's mixed-up desire, lust, trust, love, care, but no jealous is found. And respect to other needs n desires "
Dec 14, 2020
"Aphrodite, you've done a great job of portraying the most intimate of relationships, and this is no small undertaking. I understand English in not your first language, and you deserve high praise for the courage and effort it takes to tackle something so difficult, so by all means, press on. I am constantly looking for ways to improve my writing, and I am certainly not an expert, but here are a few things that I believe might make your story better. Some of the 'experts' say, "Have a clear Beginning, Middle, and Ending. Introduce your characters and their connection. Is this a special day, etc. When he adjusts the music, I think you substituted the word 'quite' for 'quiet'. This is easy to do, and I've done the same thing many times. I found that there is a free version of Grammerly that might help on things like that. I've never read erotic romance before, it's not my genre, so I may not be the best judge, but I want to encourage you to continue to read and study writing. Write about what you love, and I believe the sky is the limit for you. Best of luck!"
2/5 💫
"There isn't anything about the story I really enjoyed. I guess the sex was okay, but it wasn't written well enough for me. Things I think you could work on: (-) The Cover No one wants to read a story with a boring cover. Ever heard the phrase, "don't judge a book by its cover"? Yeah, that's a lie. If you want some free cover art, just come onto my wall and ask. I've made all my covers, and I've made a lot for other users as well. (-) Paragraph Formations Some paragraphs stretched to be about 3/4 of a page. That is not ideal. Keep it 3-5 sentences, please. (-) Dialogue Remember, these are people. Human beings. Not robots. Meaning that your dialogue is very choppy. For example, no one is going to say "He kissed me slowly his tongue dancing in my mouth" (PS, that sentence is also dramatically incorrect). (-) Clarity This story isn't clear at all. Once again, your work is choppy and it does not flow well at all. It's like I tossed a bunch of metal into a mixer, expecting a milkshake. (-) Grammar I know you said English wasn't your first language. There are free websites like Grammarly.com (which is what I use for my writing) that goes over grammar and spelling issues. It can also tell you the tone of your writing, and how clear it is. You could also hire a beta reader (email me if you want one!). Beta readers should discuss and go over your mistakes IN DETAIL so you don't make them twice."
