What is your opinion?
Must Read
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Amazing g book
"I haven't read for over 5 years because I couldn't find a book that I enjoyed. But once I found this book, I can't but not read it."
An intriguing read!
"As a huge fan of the Assassin's Creed series, this story immediately piqued my interest! It is very well written with enough description to feel like you are there, within the story, and despite only being 5 chapters in, the plot is well thought out and the characters relatable. There is enough intrigue and almost like an ancient charm within the story to keep the reader hooked! I cannot wait to read more!"
Fantastic
"This book is definantley a movie in my head. The action, the emotion, the steamy parts. This book has it all. For those of you considering reading this book. Just start now... and comment along the way. You will not be dissapointed. Great job"
Good Read
"Love how the book isn't set in America or Europe. I can see your interest in bellydancers is prominent and you tied that into the story excellently. I think a key part of writing a novel is that you leave a piece of yourself behind. The plot is a nice, an assassin loyal to his career who slowly falls in love with a girl that he rescued. Unless you add some major plot twists, it'll seem a little boring (and I admit to skipping a few scenes that weren't action-packed because it did indeed get boring). You also made a few spelling errors, but I'm sure you can fix that will a little fine-tuning. Good luck with the rest of your story ^^"
Thumbs Up
"This was so well written and honestly, this story delivers on a level of interest I was not expecting it to. It reminded me of a few movies I have seen with similar plots but the author does a grand job at uniquely telling this story and wow was I taken by it."
WOW In love with it!!
"I'm In love with this story! Can't wait to read more! I'm amazed at the creativity and detail you put into the story. The story structure and flow is amazing. Wow and the name of the place reminds me of a movie, the prince of Persia. Very good, can't wait for next update!"
A New World
"I'm going to be honest, stepping into this I had preconceived notion that I would dislike the novel because the bio reminded me of some of the video games my boyfriend plays. However! The beautiful writing technique brought me into this whole knew world I have come to love, I felt as though I were watching the elegance of the dancers with everyone else. I'm very excited to see where this gets taken, and I'm sure Lorena will not like Lusia at all haha. Keep writing!"
"I av nothing to dislike. I will recommend this to my friends. "





