What is your opinion?
Mystery
"A story full of mystery and drama. It's intriguing and interesting. My advice would be edit a bit the dialogues, I felt they where a tab confusing. Second, some grammar mistakes but that can be edited. Story structure also needs a bit of editing, but overall the story has potential. it makes you wonder what happened to Ava. So keep it up!"
when it happened
"Nice story, Keep writing , I enjoyed it"
When it happened
"The overall plot is gripping and I’m wondering what happened to Ava. I noticed that chapters 3 and 4 are the same and chapters 5 and 6 are the same — I’m wondering if this is an error on my end on yours. There are a few grammar mistakes but that can easily be fixed, I think this novel will be a good read and I’m excited to read the rest! Great work, keep it up :)"
