What is your opinion?
Caged-Free Bird
"The story was good, specially your title were so attractive and you have match the story with titles so perfectly. The story seems like a real life story not imaginative which makes it more interesting. Overall you are good elaborating your imagination, Keep up the good work. All the best for future."
Caged
"The story structure is quite good. If my guess is not wrong their will develop nicely, but I suggest a couple of things. for example the short breaks in the paragraphs, feel like they make things not flow nicely. So this affects the reading. Another advice will be time. when it comes to time, try to use lettering instead of numbers. The story would look good with twist and turns. More character description and development will help also. But overall good."
Caged - Free Bird
"I like the plot of the story and I do sense some real excitement coming up. But I think it's better if you could maybe re-read your story again. That way I believe that you could add more description to places that deserve more description and also correct any grammar mistakes you find on the way! But I love your idea, the creativity you've put into it is awesome! All the best and keep up the good work!"
Caged
"I like it so far. It have a good storyline.My only problem is sometimes the flow breaks in the story and the paragraphs are too long sometimes that makes the story slow. Other than that everything is fine. Good luck."
