What is your opinion?
Great!
"Firstly, I want to say how amazing it is that this writer wrote this book even if with a few grammatical mistakes. It is truly an accomplishment! Next, I want to congratulate the writer on the beauty of the fact that the readers are able to grope on to the emotions and the descriptions of the main characters, even if it was a third person's point of view! I don't know how I could have made it any better! All I found problematic was the grammar, but I truly loved everything else!"
Zany Destiny
"In my point of view, the story is great as far as I read. Since this is your first book I will have to say that it does have a great start. But if you could correct the grammar in your story then it is good to go. Hope you write more books in the future. Best of luck. Keep writing."
Zany Destiny
"First of all congratulations on starting writing a book. I know personally how hard that is, am I'm a writer myself. The writing at the moment is, to be honest, a bit clunky. There are words missing so things aren't grammatically correct, If this was only occasional, it wouldn't matter as much, but these mistakes are quite frequent, so it distracts the reader from enjoying the book as much. My suggestion to you is start editing, perhaps get Grammarly? I use that site myself and it works really well. Also, if you read the work out loud, it can help you realise if there's a word missing, or if it sounds right. Don't give up, and keep at it. Good luck! Sofia"
