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hope

"I thought this poem was beautiful and its words are so powerful and relatable. The author is amazing for sharing this connection with the world and I am so thankful for that. I teared up reading something that seemed all too familiar. I really appreciate them for being vulnerable and letting their thoughts and feelings and cares about the world and their life happening around them and pouring everything into the poem. It speaks volumes about how the world has changed. I want to thank the writer for how well and raw this poem is, they should be really proud because it can touch the hearts of many souls who may feel alone out in the world. Overall, amazing!"

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So relatable

"I really like this it's really relatable especially finding a boy! haha"

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amazing

"I loved this poem as it was very motivational. Also I appreciate the poet for sharing her real life experience. The thing that I loved the most was that this poem was short and sweet. It didn't consumed more than hardly 5 minutes of my spare time. Also the poet has a good sense of rhyming words. or else in some poems you can observe the situation. The poets try to rhyme words which are completely different from each other and makes no sense. This poem was very sensible and I loved the way the poet conveyed her message. But would suggest her to use 'some' heavy words which will make her poem look more attractive. But I really loved it and this poem deserves 5 stars from my point of view as it is hard to convert your real life experience into a good and sensible poem. ^_^"

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Hope

"It's amazing and I love the rhyme, it's stuck in my head now! Keep doing this, it's great!"

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Hope

"This truly describes the term "Emotions into words". After all, it is important to write poem. We can acknowledge writer's mind through this poem. The pain is beautifully described in this poem. Losing friends and the time policy gave the pain in chest. The only hope I can see here is the silence of voice that cannot be heard by someone else. It only could be heard by ourselves. Thats so emotional. "

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Relatable and Striking

"I feel for the author, especially when I read the parts regarding the political and emotional state we are living in. No matter what country you live in, everyone can relate to this poem, one way or another. Great job and I would love to read more by the author!"

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Hope

"This was a good poem and I feel like everyone would be able to relate to this poem especially the part where the author said " Sitting on my phone wasting life away" I don't have a phone but I'm always on my computer. And this is a bad time similarly for everyone so this is a sadly relatable poem that is something you connect to when read."

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Hope

"This made me tear up honestly and I love the rhymes and it is a relatable concept of growing up and having to accept changes. But a minor grammatical error is the blurb you wrote threw instead of through. But that didn't have an effect on the storyline so it is all good, you might just want to correct it."

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Beautiful poem

"I would like to say this is one one of the best poetry collection I have ever read!! It's amazing..just 1 word for this is WOW!!!! loved it yr you are great!!😊😊"

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