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Great !!!

"Good job.🤩 I really like the theme and construction of the story. You did a great job at conveying the transformation of Gray. I could feel all the emotions and reactions. ❤️❤️. There was a well balance of hot and humour. Those embarrassing scenes really added the spice. 😌 I’m all in for this book. ✌🏻💯"

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Thumbs up!

"I usually read stories from the first person narrative, but this one is from the third person narrative and it is surprisingly good. Maybe the author is just amazing but I can wait for more. Keep it up!!"

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🎶 Big Werewolves Don’t Cry ...🎶

" ...At least Jesse doesn’t cry no matter how many hearts he chooses to break. With his teen, blonde, good looks, Jesse is used to picking whomever he wants among the beautiful girls. But lately he has become bored with his easy conquests. What would it be like to have sex with a male? he wonders. Would he able to destroy their hearts just as he has done to so many others? Gray on the other hand, has always harbored a secret crush on Jesse. When Jesse mentions his casual interest in boys, Gray realizes his chance has finally arrived to announce his love to his best friend. But unfortunately Gray realizes that he is too late or too early. He watches Jesse casually flirt with another boy named Kai. Gray rages feeling the wolf trying to from emerge inside of him. How can Gray remain friends with Jesse after this betrayal? And will he be able to control the beast that demands both blood and vengeance? Interesting story. While I’ve read many novels about bisexual and homosexual vampires, this is the first time I’ve encountered a homosexual werewolf. (Though technically Gray is asexual.) I also enjoyed reading about Gray’s painful transformation into a werewolf even as he desperately tries to control himself. Personally, I’d label this under erotica rather then romance or horror genres. I think it fits there better. At any rate this was a fun read about the dangers of romance running amuck. "

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Interesting

"Good job! You made the start interesting enough to keep reading en then some hot and embarrassing scenes to make you addicted. Some sentences are hard to read. You describe a little too much for my taste but that's to blame on me. Chapters weren't too long this can be a curse in the future if you get fans(as I'm sure you will) they will expect lots more(seeing comments on books). Last you seem to get a little too fast to the plot of your story (the little story before your book I don't know what it's called) explains most of what already happened. I will keep reading!"

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