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Unwanted

"This story is amazing because I am a big fan of BTS and all the fan fiction books about them are romance mainly. And this is something different from all the others which made me give you full stars"

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Unwanted

"The plot is perfect with mysteries. I could fall in love with characters. This is an awesome story that is mysterious and unlocks the creative door to the imagination like what will happen to fans if bts got disband. Nearly, this is farsightedness of the author. Really good job!"

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Unwanted

"This book is going to be awesome! I loved everything! I'm not really into BTS but this one changed my mind. The characters are very dynamic! And the description of characters you gave on the first chapter was a good idea! I will definitely wait for the further chapters! Keep it up :)"

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Loved it!!

"I am caught by the summary, keep up the good work!! Keep writing and keep smiling :)"

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Highly Recommended

"I my self is a fan of kpop, I am no army BUT this is a really good book. it kept me hooked I have never seen a cover like yours, its original, I also like Tiffany and Jessica. they are my favorites so far. It could change. Your plot is well thought out and well designed, the summer got my eye, it is one of things that got me hooked on the story. You dont have to be a kpop fan to read this, it is easy to understand and has an amazing story line, grammer and spelling is outstanding and the writing style is damn good"

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This is Great

"i am caught by the summary, keep up the good work"

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Thrilling πŸ€—πŸ‘Œ

"I liked the story very much. ❀ I liked Tiffany's character very much, and Jessica's too. ❀ I was very excited after the second chapter, about what would Jessica do with the money. And I am interested in Tiffany's art of drawing.πŸ’›πŸ’š And it looks good in the cover. The plot of the story is very nice. πŸ’ I am waiting to know will she be able to go for the concert. And I liked the way you present each and every scenes. Actually you are a great author.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’š Keep on going with fantastic stories dear...... πŸ€—πŸ€— Waiting for the next chapter.... πŸ’›"

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Unwanted

"The story is going well, and I am loving it. I love Tiffany. πŸ’œ Their parents trust Jessica rather than Tiffany. 😳 But I didn't thought that Jessica would go to work in a cafe for a concert.😦 She is cheating her mom, in the name of prep class. 😑 Anyways, I am loving the story. πŸ’š I don't know what to say now. But I'll be reviewing this story, once again when you're completely done with it. πŸ€— So, in the second review I'll be writing all my feelings and thoughts about this story.πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’š Hope you are enjoying my story too. ❀❀"

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Promising start

"What a heartbreaking plot you've come up with, especially for ARMY! I must say I can't wait to find out what you have in store. It's a bit early in the story with only one chapter in to judge the plot but your intro drew me in like a moth to a flame. My advice is to watch your grammar so even the grammar Nazis can't complain. I use Grammarly to help me, you should try it. Keep going, it's good!"

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Unwanted

"Hey there πŸ‘‹ I'm actually a fan of BTS and it's been 5 years since I've liked them πŸ¦‹β€οΈ I do know that at some point they will have to stop making music and stuff like that, but I didn't wanna think about that just yet because they really make me smile whenever I'm sad πŸ˜”πŸ˜” The first chapter I've read was quite sad for me because as a BTS fan, the word 'disband' itself made me sad 😭 The second chapter was about the characters, Tiffany and Jessica ❣️ Both of the characters are superb β€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈ I'll definitely recommend this story to all of my friends πŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œ Please update soon because I'm waiting the upcoming chapters πŸ€—πŸ’•βœ¨ -Kookie πŸͺπŸ’•"

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Highly Recommended

"Considering this is a crazy review from me cause I only saw 2 chapters but the plot is just perfect, the storyline fits everything with the cover so well that I can't find any faults with the grammar. Anyways, I definitely will recommend this book and to the author, keep up the good work!"

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I love BTS

"The plot is always important in a story. If you don't have a good plot then there is no meaning to write the story. Your book has a great plot and might be the best ff I have ever read. All the ff are about love and those silly things. They totally exploit idols in ffs. Keep writing! "

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Woah!

"Bts! Ain’t a fan, but have heard a lot from my friends.... A really good plot, with a good writing style and structure, with a lot of mysteries... Keep up the great work!❀️ "

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I really liked it!

"The book's plot was really nice, although, to be honest, I'm not that big of a fan of BTS. I love their songs, but I don't like fanfiction based on them. This book changed my mind completely! Now, fanfics are loved by me! I could read it again and again and not get bored. Second, this book's character development was beautiful and one of my favorite parts of the book. I also love how the grammar is pretty nice! I really like the plot, as I said before! The structure of the story is confusing, and that's how I like it. I have to imagine everything to truly understand. I really liked it!"

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Rly nice

"I rly liked it even tho it started with BTS disbanding, and it would've been perfect if you used Y/N instead of inserting names, it would've got me more engaged. A few grammar errors but everyone has them and can correct them :) keep writing!"

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