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When Dawn rises

"I really like this especially the scene with Kiya booping the half shifted wolf's nose. That was cute."

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Interesting read. LOTS of potential

"This story is heading in the right direction. The plot and the mystery is building up. I encourage you to finish writing. Great job, and thanks for sharing your story.😊"

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Interesting

"So far its interesting and has potential. I encourgae you to conitnue it. It's nice and descriptive has a good touch of fantasy and I love the flow. The charatcer looks tough. Baddass in other words. Love it would love to see more of it! Kudos to you!"

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Great book

"This was absolutely great. I’m sad that the book might never finish, but either way, I loved it!"

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When the dawn rises

"I really enjoyed the beginning of chapter one ( Before 11 years later ) . After that I was a bit confused as to what was happening. Your writing style and grammar are great."

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