Boy who broke in my window

"Soo good love this "

Good

"Great but some spelling errors "

My Review Of Boy Who Broke In My Window

"Kudos to Dhira Vidhea, author of Boy Who Broke In My Window, an otherwise engaging tale of love and acceptance of the quirkiest of individuals, whose overall conception of the plot is spot-on and whose writing style is impeccable and as for her writing skills they are the best I've ever seen, though her grammar could use a little work, but other than I commend her on a good job overall."

Boy Who Broke In My Window

"so far I am hooked and totally a fan. Your narative technique is great coz it makes the reader genuinely feel like they are in an overly mature 17, soon to be 18 year old mind. Your discriptive diction is so vivid and spot on. The plot also developing nicely ...... in short I really like it so far I cant wait to rrad teh rest and see what happens :) :) <3"

Good Story

"The story has a good plot and the story make people laugh, i think this story is the best story i read thank you for the story, i hope this story can win the contest"

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Boy Who Broke In My Window

"Quick and Sweet. I loved the plot of the story, lots of twists and turns and the characters were perfect... yet... this story was far from perfect. The story was riddled with info dumps and I mean a LOT of info dumps. Every couple of lines and even right at the start of the novel which almost lost me. Yet I still enjoyed it nevertheless."

boy who broke window

"I read 4 chapters before stopping. The only thing appealing about the story was the photo of youth on the cover page, who seems more appealing than Howard in the story. However, the story's choppy chapters do entice the reader to read further."