I enjoyed the story memorise of gaia the edge of despair

"Memorise of gaia the edge of despair was an enjoyable book to read cant wait for the next one"

Great 📙 book

"Very well written book. Really enjoyed reading it. Now the 2nd book 📙 😀"

Memories of Gaia: The Edge of Dispair

"Wow...what an adventure this book took me on. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading the next one."

So far...GREAT!

"I have not finished reading the story yet, but so far, I must say, it is amazing. This coming from a huge Potterhead, a Hunger Games, Rick Riordan, Divergent, Maze Runner, Fallen and Mortal Instruments fan. So, I know my fantasy and fiction! From what the other reviews say, I gather that this is the first installment in a series. Can't wait! A little bit of advice...proof reading goes a long way. Get someone else to read through it before you publish. Other than that, good job! xox. ♡."

Finish series

"Seems a series should be completed before publishing. I enjoyed the two books, however, waiting for the next book is frustrating with no idea when it will appear. By the time the next book is published, it is difficult to remember the other books. "

Magical!

"I loved being thrown into this fantasy world. The author is great with her words and develops memorable characters like Valeena, Tellah, and Valeena's mother. The characters are unique and really go along with the plot. I was rotting for them the entire novel, feeling for Valeena as she tries to accomplish her ending goal. The ending ends the book nicely while still teasing for more to come! I can't wait for the second book to come out! Memories Of Gaia: The Edge of Despair was certainly memorable. Good job to the author! I can't wait for Book 2!"

A gripping fantasy

"A thrilling and original plot that has captured my attention. I have yet to finish, but I will! The writing style is superb, though sometimes feels a bit overly descriptive. I am able to picture the scenes in my mind and feel connect to the main character. I am captivated by Valeena and her journey to figure out her origins and find others like herself. This story is a perfect marriage of fantasy, adventure, and mystery and is a great read!"

Well written and shows promise

"I am usually not a fan of dream sequences especially as an opening for a book but I think you managed to pull it off well in this case. A few grammatical errors but despite this the story is written beautifully, very descriptive, but not overdone and realistic enough to give the reader a strong picture of the scene. The Main character Valeena's plight is well portrayed, being held virtually a prisoner by the hateful Queen Maylee and her daughter the reader soon feels empathy for the girl and curiosity for her true purpose. All in all it has the makings for a great Fantasy novel."

Spellbinding

"You've got me hooked on your words. I need them like I need air, water and food. I haven't read very far into this, yet I'm entranced. It's a very original plot, I thought, and the characters seemed to live and breathe as I read along. Your storytelling skills are superb and I can't wait to continue reading. I'm in love. Great work!"

Nice!

"Great story! Grammar could be improved here and there. Other than that, very nice!😊"

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A nice try, with room for improval

"This story has potential, and the characters are all interesting, the heroes brave enough and the villains as evil as it goes. The whole plot is mostly original and the descriptions are beautiful and detailed. My biggest problem is the narrative: sometimes it's just too linear (for example Valeena did this, then did something else etc) and the grammar is too sloppy. Overall, a very nice try, I will read the second book of the series."

Creative

"This story did a number of things right. It continually introduced new scenery and new characters with new personalities, right up to the end of the book. It included brief but vivid descriptions throughout, and the prose was often pretty. There were dozens of difficult conflicts along the way, where the protagonist and her friends could show their strengths. On the negative side, progress toward the end goal was slow and episodic. The book was not strongly structured, and it didn't really build to a climax. Instead, it wandered from conflict to conflict, and then took a rest, to be continued in another book. The narrative also relied strongly on disgust and fat jokes: the word "spat" was used far too frequently as a dialogue bead. The characters themselves changed little, except in learning to tolerate one another. While colorful, they fell a bit short in likability - it is difficult to identify with prickly characters when the reader isn't familiar enough with their pain to be sucked into their struggles. Overall, the story begins well, and the author clearly has talent, but the book's structural problems weigh it down."

Pretty good (coming from someone who hates fantasy)

"It's ok, structurally it starts off strong. The dream is a good way to start, a little action a little foreshadowing, it serves it's purpose but there's a mistake I think in the very first line. It says 'burst' when it should be 'bursts' I think, I'm not sure. That's a stumble at the first hurdle. A little fairytalish, the evil queen and the good but different princess, it's nothing that hasn't been done before, but it's original enough to stand on it's own depending on what direction it goes in. The writing is pretty good, some of the description, some of the similies at the start were pretty cringeworthy but it got a little better as it progressed. Overall, for fans of the genre I don't see why they wouldn't enjoy this."

I like it!

"Fantasy and adventure aren't my favorite genres, but there are a few books in those genres that catch my attention and make me want to read to completion - this is one of those. There are a few technical issues, but overall the story is interesting enough for me to overlook them. I can't finish it right now, but I've added it to my reading list and hope to eventually read the entire story. I look forward to it!"

Pretty Good

"The writing style and grammar are great, the plot is mostly original, but comes off as a Sailor Moon meets Snow White type of thing. Over all this is pretty good."

Hey

"Where was elden"

Memories of Gaia: the edge of dispair

"There were many grammer errors and the plot seems to have no moral message. The characters are a hodgepodge of different things from different genre. The author doesn't keep to the same time period consistently "

A great start

"I like the plot and the characters. I think it is a great start. However, I do think it needs some work. The dialog and the switches between paragraphs seem stilted and forced which take away from the flow of reading. I like the plot and I like the idea; and I think it was very good, and overall i like the story. I just think the flow of the story and the dialog needs a bit of work to make it flow better and not seem so stilted and forced. I would be happy to review and help if you want, even if it's just reading again. It was a good story and I am enjoying the story"