What is your opinion?
Do This In Memory Of Me
"I liked how the author gives the reader an explanation of a dagli at the beginning. I thought this story was quite chilling, it is unique and although it is short it's a great read. The author has done a great job of leaving the reader wanting more. I look forward to seeing more stories from this author ❤"
A memory you'd rather forget ...
"If Sir Alegria ever invites me over for dinner, I think I'll be declining .... xD Good job with this! I liked the explanation of what a dagli is; it's kind of like flash fiction, but the name is a lot catchier and intriguing. You built up the suspense well, especially given that it was such a short piece. The dialogue was good and definitely read like how people actually talk in real-life. Ending it with a line similar to the title was a great way to tie it all up and make the reader feel just as horrified as the characters. Good job with this :)"
Compelling
"This was an amazing short story I really enjoyed. Light, calm, perfectly paced and with a dark twist at the end. I have high standards when it comes to thrillers and I enjoyed this story much more than I expected. Great work! The plot could have used a bit more depth but considering it was a short story, I'll rate it 5 stars. The writing style was well suited for the story and I didn't notice any technical errors. Overall, wonderful job, can't wait to read more from this author!!"
Intriguing!
"An intriguing premise to a riveting thriller! The writing style is well composed with imagery that causes shivers. I also very much appreciated the pacing of the plot, paired with the final chapter's humorous and creepy twist! Well done! My only critique would be to add more depth to the characters by elongating the narrative, which would in turn strengthen the plot. Overall, this is a compelling thriller story I very much enjoyed reading!"
OMG!!
"Just imagine the protagonist's reaction when finding a finger of a person in our own food........... Sir Alegrio's dialogue at the end is so good......"
