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My scandalous lover

"omg! I loved this novel. First of all this was totally my type of book. Second, the way you give all the details is awesome! You just have to fix few grammatical mistakes and maybe make the cover more attractive. Rest all is perfect! Keep it up!"

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My scandalous lover

"It is an amazing book so far! there are many characters but the description is well so nothing to get confused with. The chapters are short which I love the most, no grammatical mistakes which I admire and a sense of mystery which is created at the last of every chapter is amazing. ^-^"

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MY SCANDALOUS LOVER

"You guys know I am not actually into books which actually revolve around 18th or 19th century. But for this book, the case is different. I don't know how but somehow I found this book and started reading it. In the first chapter after reading the comments I was completely shocked as this is the first time that and 18th century book has hooked me up and that to so much. The advantages of this book are: 1. The chapters are crisp and short. 2. the plot of the story is wonderful. 3. describing skills of author are good. 4. There are no grammar mistakes which makes it easy and more fun to read So overall, I can say that this book is all-rounder. In short, loved this book and would suggest you to read it too ^_^"

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Scandalous Lovers

"I really like how you have chosen to base your story line on the 1800s. It’s quite unique and different from all the other books I have read. I believe this book is doing wonderful, the plot is interesting and I can’t wait to see how it ends. I’ve never really read a lesbian type story, but I think it’s brilliant so far. The details of the clothes they wore back then as well as there actions helped me understand what it was like for women and how they had certain duties back then. I can’t wait for the next update great job author!😊"

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Nice

"I like it so far. Sounds like a book that contains things from the old days. Can’t wait for more updates :)"

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Great story!

"This is only the first chapter and I'm liking it so far. I have no room to talk about writing and but I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes! Keep up the good work! ❤"

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It's an interesting story

"Lemme start by saying, author, whatever happens, please don't be mad at my review 😢. I'm sorry if it's not much of a positive review but I hope you can take this more as constructive criticism. Your story has potential and that's why I want to be earnest with my comments. The pros: Ok so far I've read, this book got an interesting setup. I like the timeline, the characters and their stories. The short writing for each chapter made the reading brisk and easy too. And I like their first event together, playing snowball and wandering free into the forest. It's loveable and sweet for their moments^^ Improvements: I'm not fond of the event happening in the latest chapter (this is just my preference as a reader, not reflecting the author's overall story). They treat her ordeal so flimsily like it's a small matter and I found that quite unrealistic. And I think the author can flesh out the characters, the description and the events better (author has the talent, her description skill is quite good actually). But they all are very brief and I'm guessing it's because of the short length of every chapter. The spacing and the words can be streamlined too especially on the dialogue part for smoother reading. Overall, it's a simple and nice reading for me. I've never read a lesbian story before but this is quite a refreshing pov. The writing can be improved (like all writing in the world, I mean every story has flaws what?) and I see good potential in the story that can be polished ❤"

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