What is your opinion?
Adventures of a forgotten middle child
"A great fantasy story (that I really hope is still ongoing) that includes: -A forgotten middle child -Forgettable pronunciation -A dude in need of souls -Threat of possible nonexistence -Eternal doom??? Please, please let this story be on going. This is too good to stop at three chapters. The tone is so matter of fact- kind of feels like A Series of Unfortunate Events? That's what makes it so good too. The exaggerations are on point too. Spotted one or two typos, but I'm assuming this is an unfinished piece of writing, so that's alright. I'm loving this so hard!"
Could be a future bestseller
"I loved the over exaggerated characters and the unrealistic way everyone behaved towards Beam. In my mind it played out like a cartoon. it was wonderful, and very cleverly written. Only his sister seemed remotely normal. The only thing I wasnt sure about was the similarities hell had with our world. I can't wait to read the rest especially how Innee will have changed the world. "
The playlist
"The playlist is all about this girl who was in a bab accented and now she can not remember anything that happen there and anything from when she was born the whole time she was in the hospital she thanks it is her mom and dad but she does not if of is her mom or dad but the whole time her mom is just crying and she can not stop crying because how she feels about her daughter and her Dad is just calm as he can be I don't thank that he like her or loves her or cares about her. "
seriously 😂😂
"your really awesome i hope that you become one of the best😄 I really enjoyed it i like your style, it remains me of someone I knew and loved And I'm looking forward to new ones 😁 You THAT IS READING THIS REVIEW THIS YOU MUST READ THIS 😂😂!!!"
Looking Forward
"It's much longer than I expected a 4 chapter story to be, but it is a compelling start. I'm looking forward to future chapters in the points of view Kayen, his brother, and the devil currently inside Kayen's body."
fateless review
"I was with you right up until we entered he'll and then it.got confusing but I am definitely intrigued and already backing KN for.the win and his sister. (want to slap his mother). it a playful and original story with a quirky accent. "
Fateless, not humorless
"What do you do when you're staggeringly mediocre and you're surrounded by a sickeningly over-achieving family and you're kind of just lackadaisically meandering through life, but then one day someone odd, slightly mischievous and kind of unbelievable appears and promises that they can give your life purpose and make you better all around, and all it would cost is for you to give up your body and self for 7 and a half days? This is the situation Kayen finds himself in just before he is thrust into the depths of Hell and is forced to navigate 7 levels to deliver a contract and make it back before he forfeits his existence and body, forever trapped while someone else leads his life. Jae Xerrano takes Kayen on this adventure through the depths of Hell, the heights of Heaven and a few places in between in hilarious fashion. He makes you care for and sympathize with a big, red, rage demon with a heart of gold who's stuck in hell of his own volition as he attempts to cleanse his soul of the misdeeds from his former life (admittedly, this made me tear up a bit...poor Griv). He makes you smile as a succubus and a fateless start to become sweet on each other. And he makes you fear for Kayen who's fateless existence of simple neutrality is jeopardized when he unwittingly forfeits his body to a devil (not THE devil) who takes it on a wild joy ride, tipping Kayen's soul scales in the wrong direction in a truly erroneous fashion. Every moment of Kayen's journey to reclaim what is his holds new and unbelievable sights, whether it be poor souls in hell who spend eternity trying to solve Pi or Frank Sinatra as one of the four horsemen of the apocalypse, every step of this ride is filled with fun and laughter, but also fear and tons and tons of hope."
