What is your opinion?
Chapter 1
"I am writing a review for Chapter 1 The chapter was wonderful, I loved the grammar of the writer, the flow of the story was really good. I loved the slang - ''a hunk of junk'' The plot was beautiful. I could see the character development clearly, but what I thought was unappealing was when the character was talking to us, like she knows; it's a book that we are reading. Everything else was great, I would highly recommend it!!"
Great start!
"So far the story is really intriguing. I love the characters that have been introduced so far and they have really good, solid personalities already. I cannot wait to see more from these characters as the story starts to flesh out some more. I really like the authors writing style. It is not hard to follow but it gives a good insight into the characters thoughts and feelings. Wonderful start! "
Awesome
"The cover of the book is awesome. I am really into artistic things and your cover was the first thing that attracted me. I have seen many authors describing there characters late. Like when you let your readers know there names there should at least be a para of something about them. This is why I fell in love with your writing style. The way you described every character especially Seth and her next door neighbour was up to the mark. Keep it up. Waiting for more! "
Great start!
"I really like your book so far, just right off the bat from the first chapter. The main character is quirky and interesting and I’m intrigued to see why she wanted to move. The length of the chapter is already good, especially for mobile reading. Excited to see what else’s in store! Keep it up 👍 "
Interesting!
"First of all, I see multiple things I already love, just in the intro! First of all, the authors name, Artemis, represents the Greek goddess of the hunt. Now, the title, and concept, "New beginnings" is a representation in Egyptian mythology, where each day, the Egyptians didn't only believe each day was a chance to start over, or usualy stated "a new day", but they also believed each day was a new world! I'm not exactly sure if these references are purposeful, but it is hard to believe that such things would be coincidental. References such as this, can pull in many readers, and I do think myself as one of them!"
NEARLY NEW BEGINNINGS
"I really loved your plot and your flawless grammar. No offence. But then what I found the problem was that the chapters seemed confusing and long too maybe because of the heavy words you have used. Most of the meanings I didn't knew so I had to search them up and it made it time consuming. So I would suggest you to reduce the number of heavy words and use a bit more simplified English so that any age children can read your book as you story has not only a lot of potential but has an extremely intriguing plot. So I would love to highly recommend it to everyone.^_^"
