What is your opinion?
My own pirate
"It's such an interesting story and the fact that it has comedy end "
ArianaLionwood
"Loved the story...great work"
Amazing
"I loved this story. How it all started to what happened at the end. There are a few technical errors that would need to be looked at, but overall a great concept and wonderful story."
Loved it
"I loved it, it was a great story from the start and to the end. I hope for you to continue to write these amazing stories. Although there were few writing corrections, there is nothing wrong with this story. the plot is interesting. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work!"
Good
"Reading a good story like this one, I suggest you join Novel Star’s writing competition on April. "
Pirate gentleman
"I liked the characters and plot of the story overall, but I didn't love it. Unfortunately, this was not a romantic story. Although, supposedly they fell in love and slept together, that part was not developed at all. It was more of an adventure, but even that was mild. Also there were grammatical errors every single chapter. I think the author thought up a good plot, but the execution could have been better."
My very own pirate
"Nice plot, unsentimentally told. Sometimes it seems a little bit too cool, considering the events described. And never trust an automatic correction program. It ruins a lot with all its mistakes."
Good Pace
"This story starts at a quick pace and pulls you in. I like the conflict of things. My own complaint is the middle where things slow down a bit and get repetitive. However, this has me intrigued enough to keep going."
Jetsam & Flotsam..Found At Sea
"Erica was floating along, no purpose or direction Drifting along like a piece of wood tossed into the sea Casey became the lodestar that centred her and gave her life some meaning As some of the other commentators mentiined, the lovemaking scenes were pretty tame but it didnt detract too much from the storyline The Author actually gave the houses in the story more description; the ones they found while searching for Henry Btw, what happened to the lecherous sailor, the one that leered at Erica, wanted to hear how he ended up Overall, a neat little story"
My Very Own Pirate
"It could have been better"
Interesting read
"I enjoy the premise of your story and it kept my attention. There were some grammar and spelling issues which had me rereading in several areas. And while I don't believe all romance stories need explicit intimate scenes there does need to be some kind of build up to your characters emotions. Some more character development was needed between the two main characters. I dont feel much of anything towards Erica and their romance was very flat. Just my opinion. "
Needs a little bit more sprinkle of life..
"T'was a good story with an interesting plot. It's just that it was written more like a summarized journal than an actual novel. That author needs to improve their storytelling skills. You gotta evoke emotions when you write to give it life, man. ✌"
My very own pirate
"The story is good. But the plot needed more creative building. Several times I skipped some parts which were not exciting enough. "
My very own pirate
"Loved it!! Took me away. More! Please and thank you."
My Very Own Pirate
"Great concept. Writer had grammar and repetition issues, some points were unclear and left me confused in the end. This could be a 5 star novel with an editor."
