What is your opinion?
Great start!
"We need more stories like this, set in Nigeria that focus on the lives of girls like Amina and their families. I did spot a few grammatical errors, but those can easily be fixed once the book is completed. Keep up the good work!❤"
Totally worth my time!
"Creative idea and very interesting writing style, I love it. The author writes in detail but not to the point it's too boring, I love the story, no words can describe how much I fell in love with the story after the first chapter, write on Author...you've got a long way ahead, don't stop writing this story until it's complete, I might find it on the book shelve one day!"
Review of "Amina" Chapter 1
"I really enjoyed the first chapter in this story. I appreciate how the main character Amina comes from a non-eujocentric culture, therefore her only concept of marriage being a ticket to freedom. I empathize with her emotions on how she is treated by her mother, feeling as if she does not love her - only wants her to get married so she can be rid of her. I cannot be sure, but something tells me that is not true. Yes, there are grammatical errors throughout as English is not the author's English language so they do not bother me that much in this case. Overall I think this was a great opening chapter and cannot wait to read on!"
Honest review
"I like the story idea, the book is still in it's early stage so I won't comment on the plot. The writing was a bit off. It confused me a lot. First you are writing a narrative way and then suddenly changes to descriptive. Please try to stick to one way. There are grammatical mistakes and needs to be corrected. I suggest using an app for it. Keep writing!"
Not bad
"This story has a lot of potential and I encourage you to keep writing. I am interested however there a lot of errors. It makes the story a little difficult to read however I can see that you have a vision for this story and will gladly watch as your writing improves and you succeed. Overall great job and don't give up!"
