What is your opinion?
The other Side of Love
"I have read through your story and I am pleased with it. But there are a few suggestions, I am sure will be helpful. There are some repeated sentences I think in chapter two you have to check out. Some paragraphs are pretty too long, need breaks (Punctuations). And with a few editing of the story, I am sure it will make a very interesting read. I love your narration but I suggest you bring in more characters if you can. Overall, the story is lovely"
Great !
"Good start! It’s a unique story line. ❤️🌈 definitely worth a read. I like how the author has taken time to describe every relationship. There are few grammatical and tense mistakes but it can easily be fixed with proof reading. ❤️"
The Other Side of Love
"I'm going to be honest here. In my opinion, you offered too much infromation in the synopsis. You gave me what was going to happen in the book,yes, but you also went into detail when you spoke about all the men that was going to be getting invovled. You should've just said something more ambiguious, to give the readers something to think about. Puncuation and grammar is whole other matter. You capitalized random words in random sentences, and for a minute, I wondered if you were doing it on purpose. In most of the chapters (that I've read) the main character Ulysses wasn't captialized, not even in the synopsis. continuing to read! xoxo, maya cyns."
