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Interesting.

"This is an interesting story. I used tonread a lot of mythology stories in my youth so I am not sure if this is a retelling or just another take on how things could or may have happened. The writing is pretty well done, yet the dialog is kind of close together and makes it a little difficult to ascertain who is actually speaking. Otherwise interesting read , curious to see where the story goes from here."

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Review of "Chaos" Chapter 4

"I want to start this off by stating that I do not consider myself to be a fan of greek mythology itself. However, the author's writing style and dialogue between characters has me hooked! I am excited to see more about how the relationships within the story will develop! I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that distracted from my understanding of the plot. I cannot wait to read on! :)"

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really good book

"the author thus is a really good book and I love your writing style but can you please put some space between the paragraph it will be easy to read then. I am really happy to read this book. I hope you achieve what you want in writing world."

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Unusual

"I see that this novel is new. There are only two chapters for now. And to be honest I liked the beginning and the way the Author told the story. I am sure there will be more chapters! "

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