What is your opinion?
Dani's Choice
"This was easily an enjoyable read. I actually got so caught up in the story, I forgot I was supposed to be judging it. Such an amazing story. I have to applaud you for having impeccable grammar throughout the story. The first chapter really set the pace for the story. The cover could use a little work though."
Beyond the Pale
"All her life Dani has suppressed her desires and curiosities in favor for her upcoming coronation. After all, she is first in line for the throne and there is nothing in her life more important then that. She is not even allowed to choose her own husband, but is betrothed to the handsome but awkward Elvin Prince, Flynn. That is until she meets the exotic Neowise and her whole world changes. Dani loves Neowise’s beautiful dress, her milk pale skin and the unusual ivory horns that grow from the top of her head. “Come with me” she whispers to Dani. But dare she throw away her crown for a creature she barely knows? There are some very unique characters here. (Especially with the alluring Neowise who was my favorite.) But I was a little disappointed with how short the individual chapters were. Hopefully author Vinnie will choose to add more details to her fascinating story. I did detect some lesbian under tones between Dani and Neowise. I’m not sure if that’s on purpose or not. Personally I think it makes the story more interesting with the triangle romantic relationship between Dani, Neowise and Flynn. At any rate this was a very nice start to what will surely be an interesting adventure ...and perhaps an intense romance. "
A beautiful short story
"This story was like peculiarly intriguing 🤩 The world setting, the odd Neowise and duty-bound main character,… it all felt like a strange dream. However, it was over all too quickly and I hope you write more! 😃 "
Good so far
"I liked your description and everything related to it. I was a bit confused when I started reading. You directly started it with all that description and her feelings. A prologue kind of thing would have helped. There are only 5 chapters so I hope you can look at the bigger picture and think about it. Never start a sentence with full stop. The biggest mistake. I wanted to give an honest review. So, here it is! Don't take it to heart. Your story ca make a hit. Only a few changes and you are set. I suppose this is your first book. You can learn in the way! Keep writing!!"
A Captivating Quick Read
"First of all, I'm in love with the beautiful descriptions in this story. Everything's written so beautifully and poetically - the author definitely has talent in that area. Have you ever tried poetry? I think you'd be great at it! The story itself is intriguing and manages to pack in a lot of emotion and promising ideas into such a short piece. The world, plot, and characters are teeming with potential. With some development, I could actually see this turning into a great book. Good work! An enjoyable read."
