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winds

"just awesome"

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A Marvel!

"This was a great read !! I loved the plot twists and characters. This kind of book should be made into a movie! Brilliant!"

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Amazing

"After reading a good story like this one, I can't help but suggest that you should join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star."

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Winds of Aramathea

"Enjoyable yarn, lots of swashbuckling, some romance a big swath of sci-fi. Good fun"

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Great

"Great story so far really interesting story "

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What a great story

"I loved this story. It was definitely not what I expected from the initial description. Very imaginative. A totally new take on an old type of story. A wonderful read. It did leave me with several questions to be answered though. "

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Refteshing

"Refreshing idea brilliantly executed. Can't wait for second part. "

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Great

"This is a story where adventure and sci-fi meet together. Great and very original story. I happened to lose the characters sometimes while reading. They would be doing something, and suddenly the characters would be in another place. If you can keep a gap between the perspective of two different characters or when characters goes to other places, it would be great. You have also greatly improved from the first chapter till now, and it was my pleasure to read this. Thank you for sharing the story with us."

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Fun read.

"I liked the adventure. It read well and was a page Turner. Can't wait for the next one. "

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Excellant

"Excellent story, starts well and keeps getting better and better. A LA rge variety of characters and places, lots of strong visual clues as to what is going on in the story"

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review

"very good story i recommend it for reading"

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"Winds of Aerathiea"

"I've always loved Steampunk sub-genre, so "Winds of Aerathiea" was a treat to read about how a crew could actually use an airship in contemporary times! Which, by the way, was a challenge of any plot that takes place in contemporary times--and author T.E. Adams came up with a good, & logical premise for such "Skycruisers." On Inkitt ebook reviews, I make sure NOT to spoil, so let's just say that Adams application of a popular sub-genre like Post-Apocalypse America had a refreshing twist & was key to the logic of having that Steampunk airship in the story. Adams' treatment of the characters was very humane. I do remember from Composition classes that quotation marks at the end of sentences should be: Oh, So-and-So said, I like your money "problems." as an example. Good job!"

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Very nice but...

"For such a nice book, a disappointing if not annoying end. Absolute lack of description and detail on the latest events. At the end no one knows if they made it out or not. Inconclusive and hastily finished"

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Winds Of Aerathiea

"I enjoyed this book and reccomend it for all lovers of sci-fi and fantasy. Some of the technology was a little too borderline or maybe not explained well. An asteroid large enough to make a 10 mile hole to the earth's center would probably have torched at least the entire USA, Canada, and part of Mexico. I liked the inner world, I also enjoyed the Journey To The Center Of The Earth. I also liked the airship and all of Aerathiera. Thanks, caw2019tree"

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Winds of Aerathiea

"T.E. really enjoyed the story line , your character inner action with one another. This is a new Genre for me, so I hope I am doing you some good. The story is enjoyable, fast moving, I would recommend your book to all ages over 12 years of age..............I only am reviewing 6 chapters as of time constraints, so I you wish me to continue, it will be next week...But I get the beginning chapters and I am a happy reader........thank you.......... william elliott kern"

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Winds of Ariathea

"I am really enjoying the plot of this book. The storytelling is quite good. The main criticism I have is the lack of proofreading. There are many grammatical errors, such as punctuation etc. Also I have noticed instances of a character's name being mentioned where obviously the author meant a different character. In some instances the story has been a bit confusing due to the way it jumps around. Overall, good job though. "

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