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"I was skeptical at first. However, when it gets further into the main characters life, i found the situations he puts himself in to be dramatic and uniquely accurate, in a way a lot of books dont touch. Great job!"
Highly Intriguing!!
"Honestly, I found almost no errors. The author really quotes a unique cast of characters that leaves you wanting more. I really enjoyed every chapter so far. The writing style is phenomenal! I adore all the details and back story they put in to build there characters. The plot is getting more and more complex and I can't wait for more."
I CAN ONLY SAY THAT IT DENTED ME
"Honestly, I like your story and I know I will love it even more when completed! Your power of description got me fascinated. I am pleased. Here are my few observations though, since you are still on the story. The beginning of your story is a little bit hard to comprehend but gradually the story unfolds nicely. I noticed a bit of exaggeration at the beginning like having sex a million times and all that, I know you have a good replacement for all that, that's why you are the writer! I suggest you don't use too much of vulgar because, with less of it, it comes morally alive even with the nature of the story you are telling! A lot of Persons do masturbate today, if there is a way out in your story, it may just ice the cake! Nice story! It is making an interesting read already, go on and finish it. I love to read all of it!"
