What is your opinion?
😍Exceptional
"Unique writing style, unique characters and just wonderful everything. This story literally kept me on the edge, knowing what will happen next yet not knowing. It messed up with my mind in a good way, for a moment I thought everything had fallen into place then the next thing I know Zeke is the murderer. That took me by surprise and the crucifixion was just the highest level of fucked up😂😂😂😂. It was a great read which I genuinely enjoyed, well detailed and holds just enough emotion to drive a reader crazy.⭐"
Page turning, character-driven thriller
"I genuinely could not stop reading this once I started. I typically am not a fan of highly introspective characters, or at least--ones who spend a great deal of page time in their own heads. But in this case, the character in question was so fascinating that I didn't mind. I found him just the right amounts of relatable and detestable, adding to the sense of always being conflicted, always on edge that I like in a thriller reading experience. I've always been fascinated by charismatic, selfish, intelligent characters, and this one has a convoluted depth that draws you in, unraveling and revealing mysteries one dark, dirty layer at a time. The paragraphs can get a bit long, the inner workings of the MCs mind a cluttered labyrinth that bleeds onto the page. While it's a good representation of the character's voice, it can feel a bit dense and convoluted to get through at times. Mistakes and spelling errors are minimal, making for an all-in-all professionally written story and a highly entertaining read."
We will love each other
"The what is this game inside this story is something terrible and something nasty. I can read it but not straight out. There is something tingling up my spine something that is nasty like creepy crawlies. Because this is done to a child this is a done for child. Not a light read it takes one by surprise because what the kid goes through makes him nasty too. Secretive and insincere and always thinking about himself and his world. Eventually we know that is his flaw that is what makes him so mean with the observations he is okay but does the other people affect him in any other way?"
An addictive read
"The very first chapter is a tough read, in the beginning, but by the end, you'll be ready to ride this story to its conclusion. The way this author writes is beautiful and clever, and it left me wanting more. I am only sad there are only five chapters currently posted for part 1. I think this is a great story worth your time to read."
Genius
"I think your a very clever writer. I want to read more and more. So keep those chapter comeing because I can't stop eating them up."
We Will Love Each Other
"Very well written. Tough to read at times, but overall a great story. I hurt for Ari on so many levels."
Sorry this took so long
"I really liked this book! You did so many things well that I think it's best just to say the one thing I wish would improve is using dialogue more often instead of summarizing things that were said. I think that, at some points like when characters are being introduced, slowing the pace of the story by writing out the actual dialogue instead of summarizing like "he said he was lonely and that he had never had friends so I told him I'd be his friend and then we got along just fine after that" can be beneficial for the reader, giving them time to learn a little bit about the characters while also getting their name down before moving on to the next character that has to be introduced. I jus think when everything is summarized like that it's easier to get the characters mixed up later on. Keep writing!"
Pretty Good
"I do like the vocabulary that you used! Great word usage. I do believe you should space out the paragraphs. Unless you writing in a certain format! And perhaps work on the dialogue, but it’s going really well! "
