What is your opinion?
Couldn’t stop reading
"I likes everything and the way author mixed the experience between both participants. "
Fantastic short story!
"Hi, I don't often get time to read stories, which is why I usually go for smaller short ones. And this was just the right size. I really enjoyed this short sci fi erotica. It was brilliantly written and the language within is very good. You have a great way with words. I'm hoping to read more as time goes on. I love writing myself and do alot of fantasy stuff but also love sci fi. Things just like this. I am not a good writer yet have been enjoying story telling for many years. My style is very basic and some may say boring, which is why I don't get any reviews or readers much. Is there more like this? I found this a very inspirational read and would like to see what else you have. Great story, brilliant writing, love the plot, the scenes were spicy. 👍 🔥 🙏 Five star ⭐ 👏 "
Lille
"This is my favorite short story by far. I love that both characters are pure and mature enough to express themselves without reservations, and how they shared their passion after finding out about the truth of his situation. After all of that, they developed connection that turned out to me mutual and clicked almost immediately. I really love how this author uses unique descriptive words to annotate that happenings in this story. I'm always a able to appreciate creative writing styles. I give this 5 stars all across the board and I hope there is a chance for the story to have an expanded version, one I would read in a heartbeat. Thank you"
Great read!
"Outstanding read, excellent descriptions, really well done!"
Lille
"I recommend reading all of this author's works! This story had me from page one and I binged it. The flow, description, characters... Everything was on point! Absolutely fabulous work"
Love beyond the stars
"It picks up as he is reading/ listening to the device .the story is set from the start. It starts to build up and go beyond,.it keeps you there. You feel you are really seeing it happening."
Lillė
"Enraptured. What more can I say? "
Wish it was a longer book
"I enjoyed reading this. I thought the two characters were so cute. Only down side is that it's so short! I wish it was a whole book! Would love to read a story about what happens with them and their relationship. Adorable. "
Seriously Amazing!
"This is such an adorable story of love at first sight. I was worried at first when he said he had a girl waiting for him because I’m not a fan of cheaters, so thank you sincerely, sincerely for allowing your readers to enjoy the love between Lille and Jaxen to be pure. As I’ve said, it is a short story, but the space you gave Jaxen to grieve and the natural flow of their learning each other and loving each other didn’t feel rushed at all. You managed to pack a punch into such a short tale. Well done, author. Excited to read more of your work in the future."
Warm and hot
"The relationship between the main characters was heartwarming and progressed in a believable way but quickly enough to be satisfying in one sitting. The descriptions and scenes seem like they would be hot to both men and women. "
Lillè
"I really don't want to explain my reasons for rating this book like I did, but since I have to."
Lillé
"What a great short story. Didn't feel rushed like some do. It had the right amount of erotica to it. Also the scenes were elegantly worded. I enjoyed it very much."
Lille
"I liked the story just wished could have been longer maybe let them get 2 earth n meet each others fam "
Sweet
"Very sweet little story. It definitely made me smile reading it."
lille
"An interesting, sensual and very enjoyable story, all l can say is, more please"
Lille
"Pretty stellar story - pun intended. The situation sucked and everything seemed rushed but the author did a fantastic job really pulling it together with the last paragraphs. Super cute and quick read. Great vocabulary with just a couple tiny nuances that can be edited such as tell-tale signs. "
Amazing story!
"The pacing and story arc was gentle enough to avoid being cliche. As erotica, you slow-burned into the shower scene, and damn you delivered a prize-winning story. Describing both his vulnerability and heartache and Lille's compassionate, golden (or shall I say blue) heart. You wrote it unique enough to build a world that a distraught man upon discovering through a stranger that his money, trust, and relationships would crumble like bitting a dry cookie. You gave enough foreshadowing to pique me to know more about Lille. It hints that she's NEVER done this for any man before. All the rumors he's heard in the mining colonies were envy because of the natural beauty of her people, but when Lille's people mate or marriage, it's more than the Na'vi from the Avatar film. "monogamous creatures who mate for life. The mechanics of reproduction are similar to that of humans and other Terran mammals. However, their unique physiology provides the Na'vi with a level of intimacy unknown on Earth. Cultural anthropologists believe that when an appropriate mate has been selected (which can take many years), the pair will connect queues (called tsaheylu) to create an emotional bond that lasts a lifetime. The intertwining of queues is both highly erotic and profoundly spiritual but does not in itself lead to reproduction. A single instance of this bonding ritual leads to a life-long pair bond." https://james-camerons-avatar.fandom.com/wiki/Na%27vi#Society_.26_Culture Moreover, @cafeblush your prose and editing skills are supreme. I could use your fresh and masterful talent to help me. Will you be my mentor and patron? =D"
Roy
"The story moves along at a good pace, moving towards its inevitable climax, no pun intended. Well written without being smutty. Keep up the good work."
