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Redlines

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Summary

This poem is about the lines that follows you through out your whole life. It pressents it's self as the true you and when ever you get lost. Find that line in inside yourself and find you.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

REDLINES

Redline


Living life is so hard that you start to doubt everything you want to focus on, all the small things in life.

As a teenager that isn't very easy with a family that is out of balance with many faces.

When you get older and get more curve balls to catch and need to handle on your own with no backup or any help.

When you finally are all alone with a kid and dog it starts to drown on you.

When it finally open your eyes to see what you've been through.

Once the eyes start is open you will notice all the little red lines, good lines, bad lines but there are lines.

Redline can be manipulation
Redline can be lying
Redline can be fighting
Redline can be living
Redline can be loving
Redline can be family

When the moment comes that you notice your redlines you can choose the path you want to walk.

Do you go for self-destruction and let self-doubt and fears rule your life and accept all the fightings and manipulations.

Or do you stand up for yourself and accept the mistakes you made being a teenager with no guidance.

Redline can be manipulation
Redline can be lying
Redline can be fighting
Redline can be living
Redline can be loving
Redline can be family

Do you pick the redlines that stand for you, the way you want them to be.

Is it family that also stands for loving and stands hand in hand with the living, is it manipulation and fighting new mistakes.


You can do it all over again every single time. Redlines are the guidance in life.


Everywhere you walk or everywhere you go it will always be there.


The moment you focus on the smallest things in life they bringing you back in memory.


When the moment comes that it gets heavy.

You go back to basic, your redline.


It will guide you through the struggles that getting on your path.


When you choose the right red lines the ones that make you the way you deserve.


It will bring out everything in its natural beauty and it will show you how amazing a guiding redline can be.




Lots of love Marly963
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