What is your opinion?
Grammar
"I can tell there is a language barrier. The plot is good. I am able to basically auto correct the misspellings and bad grammar as I read. I’m still hooked. "
story
"please continue the story.i am waiting for more chapters for a long time "
Enjoying this story so far
"Enjoying the story so far😊😊"
Good Job 👍
"I usually don't like to read ongoing books cause I hate waiting but this was recommended to me by my friend so I gave it a try. It's very interesting. I read the unedited version first so I was kinda confused at first until I re-read the book. As usual, Athilia is badass haha. I really like this story and I wanna see where it's heading so please update soon. "
This is amazing!
"I love it this story so much! And I love the characters (especially Athilia, she is amazing) I like how the Athilia helps everyone and is so laid back and courageous and smart and confident, and let's not forget funny , I laugh a lot because of her! And I love the story is making you think like you are part of the action,and there with the characters. Please continue to write! You are amazing at it ! ❤️🥰😍"
Interesting story
"I honest love this book its so different to all other stories I've read on here. The characters come to life and its like a movie playing in my mind as I read it. Thank you. There is so basic spelling and Grammar mistakes but it doesn't take away from the flow of the story. I would say it's the best story I've read on here for a long time and I'm looking forward to see what happens next, how fair the treason goes as well the revenge. I couldn't put the book down Well done look forward to more soon I hope."
Amazing work done
"My god, this was an exceptional novelette and I love the way your female protagonist didn't clash to clichés at all. For your plot it was hardworking and well implemented into words as I have read through your book. It seems as though even there were stumbles you had something to fall back on, and it was mind-blowing. For your characterization, it was phenomenal how she grew to be a capturing light throughout your book, and it certainly was appreciated to read a female protagonist not relying on the strops of a man or manly companionship. I have to apologize since I don't really comment a lot through books, and I am trying to get the hang of that. I understand that books have errors no matter how many times it would be edited, and I challenge you to get it right. If not for your readers, you do it for yourself. Grammar I think we all need to work on that to be honest. The English Language has invaded by so many slangs, eventually over the years have watered down what it means to speak and write proper English. I commend your story, beautifully written. You should know how well received and inspired I have been my your novelette, and it is rare in its own way, it is always great being outstanding. Without much else to say, I bid you all the good luck and the best wishes from me to you. Congratulations Author you have done outstandingly well."
Great read!
"There were some minor errors, but nothing too big so it was easy to surpass. This wasn't that bad of a book. Keep up the good work!"
The ancient kingdom
"Noooooo. I need more. I've read this book from start to finish because I couldn't put it down. That's how captivated I am. Spelling mistakes or not. This is one goooooood book"
Nice work :)
"I liked the story. Very interesting idea about time traveling;) Nice writing style, easy to read and great visualization. What I didn’t like were her internal monologues and thing like “lol” and “wink,wink.” It made me think she is on drugs or something. It didn’t match the story for me. I understand she was all alone but this just didn’t add up. But, beside that, nice work girl ;) keep it up :) "
Ancient kingdom
"Many mistakes in writing "
Interesting
"This book is unique and captivating, I found myself on the edge of my seat throughout! Nicely done, a few things however are not worded correctly and there is a few grammar mistakes, however this is overall a very enthralling experience as it allows you to dive deep into the world where ancient is combined with modern to create a very unique and interesting concept "
