What is your opinion?
Very good story
"It has a very good story line and good thing is, it wouldn't keep you waiting for the actual scene. Keep up the good work ❤️😊"
Interesting concept!
"I like the story. The concept is unique and you did your best in writing it, but you can make it more perfect by making the atmosphere chilly like in horror stories and working on your grammatical mistakes. I love horror. Your story is great. Keep it up love. "
Great start!
"There were minor mistakes, but other than that great book! Keep up the great work!"
Great job
"I really like the idea you have, but I think the way your sentences are structured brought me out of the mood. I suggest you look into that more, but for the first short of them I think you did really well, nice job :)"
Interesting :)
"I only read first chapter, but it was interesting. Maybe you could play a little with atmosphere, to make it more scary. Also, I found few errors, you should read it again and check it. It is third person POV but you have few sentences there writing in first person. :) Keep up the good work :) "
Great Job, Hira!
"This was really good, especially since English isn’t your first language! The dialogue is okay, I would be happy to offer some pointers on how to make your story come alive! This first story was really cool too! It was really suspenseful, and you paced it just right! "
