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The Gates of Avaelon

"So good!!!! Please, please, PLEASE write more about these characters, the possibilities seem endless for the adventures to be had here. Such a talented storyteller, your voice definitely speaks to me. :-)"

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Make this book into a movei!

"This was amazing! I have no words. The plots, turn of events? WOW! I loved your character development and throughout the entire story, I can honestly say I feel for them, because what they go through feels so real. I was kept on the edge of my seat and had to (at times) force myself from reading, as it was already 2am in the morning! Overall, great job. Definitely a new fan!"

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Great Fairy Tale

"I didn't realize I was supposed to read this book before your other one but it was still good. Especially since, knowing how their story ended, it was fun seeing how it all really began."

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Miss

"Nice plot and character development"

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Incredible

"I love escaping too new worlds. Yours is fantastic! They're some small errors. You may try proofreading backwards to catch them. "

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Great Story!

"I loved the characters and the extremely descriptive words used to describe them so that I could imagine them in my minds eye. Looking forward to more of this story!"

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The Gates of Avaelon

"Melissa, a five year old human girl and a five year old Hi Fae boy, named Zakkaerion, from the world of Avaelon, become best friends. With the portals between the two worlds about to close, Zakkaerion leaves, promising to return when the portals reopen in seven years. upon returning, he finds that his friend is no longer there. It had been fourteen years since he had seen his friend, And Zakkaerion, was thrilled upon discovering that she was home, but as she was not longer a child, she could no longer see her Fae friend. This is an adult bedtime Fae tale. (Fairy-tale) I immensely enjoyed the story plot, which had several twists and turns! My only gripe is that each chapter seemed to be unbearably long! I would rather read a hundred chapter book, with six to ten pages per chapter than read a twenty-two chapter book with twenty - thirty page chapters! All in all, this was a great story line! NRF"

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Gates of Avalon

"I have became a fan of Margaret Fisher .I love the fantasy style of her writing while the characters slowly come to life .The description of each item from a chair to the sky makes me want to become a fairy or a pixie and live in the lands of the fae"

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