What is your opinion?
A wonderful piece that got me thinking.
"It reads like poetry. I remember how I felt such depth while reading your story. It feels like you are both a novelist and a poet to describe this unique world so profoundly. It's a gift. I love how you portrayed our connection with the stars in the sky, while picking your words with care.You are an inspiration to all young writers like myself. As beautiful as this story is, it still had it flaws. Grammar, spellings, and punctuation errors. I also noticed that you weren't sure when to capitalize your letters after a dialogue tag. I didn't feel immersed in your story... I couldn't get a feel of this world you're writing about. Why couldn't I heard the noise from the other persons in the background when Vincent and Josefina were having a moment in the bar? Where there no background music? I couldn't hear the birds chirping, wind blowing... I felt deaf while reading throughout the whole time. Other than that, this story had many details that appeal to the senses which made it engaging for a reader. This was an excellent story, good job. Thank you so much for inviting me into your world."
Who Stole Vincent's starry night?
"Who stole Vincent's starry night is a book that will leave you on the edge of your seat and after reading the updated chapters, I really want to help Vincent find who stole his starry night. He and Pandora were lovable so was Pablo, even Guillaume. I like that each character's story was woven into one book."
Will get you hooked!
"Existential and philosophical, this novel will teleport you into the psyche of Pablo, a man with big hopes and dreams. The writing style is what got me hooked; even though, some paragraphs were a bit chunky and in a need of some editing; the most descriptions and emotional scenes were beautifully crafted. What I liked even more was the balance between dialogues and inner monologue; it didn't feel forced and propelled the story forward. Kudos to the author, and I hope to see you grow!"
Gorgeous
"This is a beautiful, well-written story. The plot is fascinating. It sucks you in and doesn't let you go. I enjoyed the bit I got of it, and look forward to reading more in the future. The author has a beautiful, almost Shakespearean writing style, which I find interesting to read. The only reason I didn't give it 5 stars is because it is a bit tedious in some spots. Those spots aside, it is a well-written piece with an excellent flow. I noticed very few grammar mistakes and no spelling ones. Overall I would definitely recommend this book."
Fantastic
"I'm in absolute awe with this story. The writing style gives strong vibes of classical literature and as a huge fan of classics, I truly enjoyed it. The scene where Pablo was watching the lives of people from behind his camera reminded me so much of Hitchcock's rear window. This is one of those books from which the quotes are highlighted and appreciated. There are so many beautiful sentences that aren't just beautiful for the sake of it, but show the author's maturity. This is art. The plot is quite unusual and intriguing so far and I would like to know what happens next. Kudos to the author ❤️ you have great potential!!! Keep writing 😇"
Amazing Story
"I'm the type who loves to read stories filled with adventure and this book has proved it's worth otherwise. I love how the author is able to relate the lives of the characters with deep philosophical points about life in the first chapter and that I find very intriguing. Kudos to the author."
engaging
"If I am being honest,I love the fact that amidst the casual talk of the characters LouMars is giving the readers a reality check. I found the story very thought-provoking and capturing. I love the concept that is being forth under the story of the protagonist. I hope to have this one my bookshelf one day!!"
I love it!
"The story has me hooked and I am looking forward to the new chapters. "
Wisely represented
"I really love the idea of how the story is represented. I loved the writing skills, it's quiet appreciable. Eagerly waiting for the next chapters....but didn't get the suprise which I expected. Hopefully I'll get it from the upcoming chapters."
Vincent’s Starry Night Stole My Heart
"Hi there! I adored reading this, or the single chapter presented to me at least:) For starters, I would like to say how interesting and thought provoking Vincent’s storyline has become—in the very beginning of this read, nonetheless. I was surprised by how developed Vincent and his girlfriend we’re, and can’t wait to see how much more they grow throughout the work of your hands! If I had to pinpoint a mistake in Vincent’s world, I would have to say the layout of this story caught me off guard for but a moment. Your writing technique reminds me of that of Shakespeare, and therefore at first glance I would assume so should the layout of your novel. But, as all great minds have their own ways of interpreting of any character’s world and imaginative mind processes, they should also be free to surpass whatever form of writing the author so chooses. To clarify, although surprised by the author’s choice of format for three story, I also see great potential this story can have, and I for one, am thoroughly pleased to see how Vincent’s star escapade handles itself. cheers! "
