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"I really loved this so far! Can’t wait for more :) "
Love it to the stars and back
""i'll do anthing in my power to make the war games in three days or less." I don't agree with this. And trust me I've written plenty of tournament arcs and I think going down this kind of route is just not realistic or acceptable to most readers. If anything since training is involved and we're talking about immortal beings that half a year minimum and even that is cutting it a little short. Plus Altair is learning everything so soon and the story feels like your trying to push it towards its ending. But you could totally flesh this out and make it have a more emotional connection with all of your characters. I fill like there's a chunk missing in this story and you have all the keys to make it perfect. Like I demand more chapters because it's a good story but like all good stories it takes time. And for such a grand and vast idea like this one you could most definitely flesh it out. For instance Altair's familiarity with the ax, Proxima's world, and her relationships with these other gods, Even throw in some twists on why some of the gods truly want the humans to die, and maybe go into detail about why only humans are getting deleted and not other beings like dwarfs. Oh and plus by giving Altair and Proxima time to train and go on this miny adventure you can show your readers what value Altair's home and family have to compare with one another. This was going to be a comment but I'm going to use it as a review. So that this book can have the five-star review it deserves. I hope the author of such an amazing story is willing to talk to me about it. But now for you readers. This story is amazing. The writing style is different then any other story you'll read. Because it's like reading a screenplay. But that only enhances the cinematic feeling of the book as you get immersed in it. The characters are amazing and creative. Altair is a relatable character with some mystery behind him. I loved it, to say the least, and you should totally check it out and help me demand for more chapters to be released."
Among The Star Gods
"I'm loving this story. At the moment there are four chapters, and in the chapters, the author introduces very unique characters. I'm sure we'll get to see all of their unique gifts later on in the story. I like the dialogue between the characters. The plot of the story is great and can't wait to see how it continues. The writing style is different, but after reading, you get used to how the dialogue is written, and it doesn't bother me at all. Good job so far."
