What is your opinion?
Good read!
"To begin with, I loved the plot of the story. As an author, you've written it very beautifully!! Just a little suggestion - I think your chapters are very small, if you could just increase the word count and exceed more than just a paragraph, it will really help the story develop even more."
Oh My God
"So good of a story to read. Just absolutely FABULOUS!!!"
Intriguing
"There are definitely a couple edits needed. It is ab interesting read, not sure if the story is complete though. But if you do complete it, I'll love to for you to notify me."
Needs Work
"I think this is a good start, and anyone who can get this far in a book is doing a good job. But honestly, the chapters are each a paragraph which doesn't leave much development for the characters or plot. It moves fast, the characters aren't all that multi dimensional. There are also a lot of grammar and spelling issues, and I think the tone is too casual. It feels like journal entires rather than a book. Not sure if that's what you were going for. I think fleshing out the plot and characters more would be a good start. No need to rush, and do more showing rather than telling. Let the story unfold slowly and naturally and spend some time making the chapters longer and more complex. Good luck!"
